An Exile War Novel –  Book 1

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As I write this review, we’re in the middle of the summer in sunny Florida, which is also a time when numerous ‘popcorn flicks’ get released. But you know what’s even better than a fun, action-packed movie? A fun, action-packed novel! And coincidentally, Onslaught is one of those novels that beg to be movies on the big screen!!

 

FIRST IMPRESSION:

Upon reading Onslaught, the first impression I got was that this book reads like a screenplay of a mid-1990s action movie. Its dynamics, action sequences, love entanglements, attractive male and female protagonists, and simple plot all reminded me of that film era when movies had primarily one object: to entertain audiences.

And this book absolutely entertains its readers, beginning to end, despite some flaws which will be discussed further in this review.

 

GENRE:

We could label this story as sci-fi but to me it felt more like ‘action with a sci-fi flavor’. The author doesn’t delve too much into the minutiae of this futuristic world as it would be the case in classic hard sci-fi, but rather focuses primarily on thrilling action with a sci-fi backdrop. Again, this feels a lot like the sci-fi element is more secondary or textural, in this instance.

 

PLOT:

We learn that in this advanced society some individuals are born with telepathic powers which, if not kept in check, could be dangerous to humanity. A league called the Gentle Hand is created to train telepaths and put them to good use for society. Our main character, Langston Wheeler, belongs to the Hand and he is tasked with finding and subduing a dangerous ‘rogue telepath’. When his fate and that of Executive Tia Dynn cross, that’s when the real fireworks begin! 

Suddenly Lang finds himself torn between fulfilling his duty as a Gentle Hand and following his heart. When a social gathering is crashed by the rogue telepath in black camouflage, the time to think is over, and it’s time for ACTION!

THE ORDER OF THE JEDI?

I couldn’t help but see similarities between the Gentle Hand and the Jedi masters in Star Wars. They are both the result of an innate power coupled with years of rigorous training and self-control in order to protect others from evil and injustice. Instead of The Force, we have ‘telepathic powers’ here that allow these gifted individuals to even shoot flames, heal injuries, or become invisible at will. 

 

FLAWS:

What I found issue with was

1) The way the love affair develops between Lang and Tia. I am all for a good heterosexual love story but this felt a little too rushed. I understand that finding each other stuck together in the middle of a war zone can bring about a special bond, but these two are already discussing the complications of marriage just a few hours after having met! I felt like if the writer took his time to develop their reciprocal feelings more organically the emotional payoff for the readers could have been greater.

The other issue I had was:

2) The way characters like the hybrids-the result of genetic experiments on humans/hogs DNA-is not tackled in a way that would make the reader care much. What exactly led scientists to combine human and hog genes, leading to these creatures? What was the drive or intent of this research originally? 

It doesn’t need to turn into a science lesson but at least create a foundation of plausible ideas that would make all these elements more compelling.

 

IN CLOSING:

This felt like watching a 1990s movie in the summer. Full of action, explosions, pew-pew, and a good-looking woman and a handsome man not being able to take their eyes off each other. 

Frankly, I’ll take Onslaught before any movie these days!

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