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Katelynsam Interviewed by INFAMOUS

 

Q&A with Katelynsam

Author of Last Masquerade at the Carousel House

 

šŸ¦€ What authors, people, or stories inspired you to start writing?

 

Growing up, I stayed up far too many late nights reading fantasy authors, such as Cassandra Clare, Roshani Chokshi, and Sarah J. Maas among others. I loved how the stories transported me to other worlds and other lives, and so I began to write stories of my own that I hoped would do the same for my readers someday.Ā 

 

šŸ¦€ What does your creative process consist of? Do ideas for a story just come to you or is there anything specific that you have to do in order to create a story and its characters?

 

Ideas for my stories often arrive at the most random of times. Sometimes, I will see a beautiful piece of art, a scene from a movie or TV show, or something in my own life that will inspire the kernel of a story that takes days or weeks to fully develop into a story idea. When the story idea at last arrives, it does like a flash of lightning, sizzling with promise and potential. Iā€™m usually in the middle of another project when it does, so I keep a list of future story ideas that Iā€™m always adding to.Ā 

 

šŸ¦€ You submitted a story to a traditional publisher and it was rejected. What story was it? Do you feel like going independent is the way to go moving forward?

 

I wrote my first book at 12 and started querying agents (for another story) when I was 15. It took me 10 years, 6 books, and hundreds of agency rejections to finally find my first agent.Ā 

 

For 4 years, I worked with my first and second agent (both from big well-known agencies) to publish my debut fantasy novel THE FATED, which Iā€™m releasing next month. I worked with my first agent when the novel was classified as Young Adult. When we ultimately werenā€™t able to sell, I revised the novel to be adult and worked with my second agent to go on several rounds of more submissions. The feedback from the publishers on all the submission rounds was kind and flattering, but each publisher and editor had different reasons for why they felt they couldnā€™t take on the project. To give you an idea, one editor said they enjoyed the story, but that it fit too much between the area of fantasy and magic realism for the publishing house to be able to market. Another editor adored the book, but her colleagues didnā€™t share the same enthusiasm, so the book never made it any further in the acquisition process.Ā 

 

Unsurprisingly, facing so much repeated rejection for over a decade was very disheartening. I spent months of my life waiting for my ā€œbig breakā€ to come, and when it didnā€™t, I would tell myself that the next book would do it, and then the next one after that. When it became clear THE FATED would never be traditionally published, I was heartbroken. For the hundredth time, I considered giving up writing altogether, but of course, like always when this thought had crossed my mind, I kept going. Iā€™ve written for so many years that it has become a part of me, and to sever myself from it would be like losing my voice and my anchor in an already chaotic and confusing world.Ā 

 

 

So instead of locking THE FATED away in a drawer, I decided to self-publish it. The book was already polished since I had revised it at least 6 times with my previous agents over the last 4 years. It would be as ready now as it would ever beā€“and I was tired of relying on anyone else to fulfill my lifelong dream of being published. Looking back, Iā€™m grateful to my agents because they took a chance on an unknown writer and spent many hours giving me editing notes. I learned a lot from them about how to tell a story. I also am deeply thankful for the prior experience I gained about the publishing industry through both the agents that represented me as well as several agencies I interned for in college.Ā 

 

I am, however, also grateful for all the amazing tools now available for authors to publish their works themselves. As the marketing and other budgets for even the biggest publishers continue to shrink, I believe self-publishing will play an even greater role in the industry moving forward. With the rise of booktok and self-published authors landing hybrid or traditional book deals after they made tons of sales on their own, weā€™ve already seen a lot of the stigma that previously surrounded self-publishing dissipate in the winds of change.Ā 

 

šŸ¦€ Where did the concept of this carousel house originate from?

 

To be honest, Iā€™m not really sure. I just knew I wanted the setting to be luxurious and magicalā€“a characteristic that my debut novel THE FATED also shares. I also think that the concept of a lavish mansion that can spin like a carousel reinforces how powerful of a sorcerer the owner (Raidenn) is, which plays an integral role in setting up the stakes for the story.Ā 

 

šŸ¦€ Are you Yuina, the main character of this short story?Ā 

 

What a fun question! No, I would definitely say Yuina is a bit edgier than me. Sheā€™s also quite as glamorous as she is bitter, which are both traits with which I donā€™t particularly resonate. I do strive to make every main character I write relatable though in some way. So I would say I relate to Yuinaā€™s desperation to change the circumstances around her and take her power back.Ā 

 

 

šŸ¦€ In the story there is this line:

 

ā€œThe jazz music and opulent surroundings washed over our senses like the most intoxicating plume of opium smokeā€

 

Is that suggesting that Yuina smokes opium, therefore she is familiar with its effects?Ā 

 

I didnā€™t intend it that way, but readers are welcome to interpret those words for themselves. With this line, I was striving to solidify how intoxicatingly luxurious and carefree the setting of the Carousel House was. I also think it hints or at least might question how much Raidennā€™s magic might be enhancing the already lavish decorations of the mansion in order to further dazzle and disarm his guests.Ā 

 

šŸ¦€ I know you have a full novel coming out soon. Can you tell us what it’s about and what in your mind will make it worth it for readers to buy it and read it?

 

Sure, would love to! Here is the pitch:Ā 

 

Every sixteen years a luxurious ocean liner known as The Fated appears at the docks of Abeon City to carry a few lucky passengers to paradise. Yet when people onboard begin disappearing, one woman soon discovers their destination might not be paradise after all.

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Amarra Obrel never expects to receive a ticket in the mail. Ever since failing her chance at becoming a concert pianist three years ago, she has spent her days as an elevator operator, resigned to the uninteresting future that seems set before her. When given the opportunity to embark on The Fated, however, she boards with the hope of starting a new life. Yet she soon senses something dark and sinister lurks beneath the ship’s decadent halls, ornate ballrooms, and opulent jazz clubs. When people close to her begin disappearing, she is left with no other choice than to set out and uncover the vessel’s secrets along with fellow passenger Kye-Shin Hura. But instead of providing answers, every discovery leads to more questionsā€”questions about why they were selected for this voyage in the first place and more disturbingly: If not to paradise, then where exactly is The Fated taking them?Ā Ā 

With cinematic and haunting prose, The Fated is the perfect suspenseful and atmospheric read for fans of The Night Circus, Titanic, The Great Gatsby, and The Midnight Library.Ā 

This novel is for anyone who is looking for a luxurious and magical setting infused with mystery, romance, and suspense. While I am marketing it as a fantasy since it takes place in an alternative world, it has elements of magic realism as well as historical fantasy given the world of THE FATED resembles the glamor and undercurrent of tension in the 1920s-30s.Ā 

 

šŸ¦€ I always see you posting on Substack and you always come off as a very driven and motivated writer. Where do you find that motivation in an industry where it seems so hard to make your books known to the general audience?

 

I believe every rejection Iā€™ve received has made my resolve and determination to share my work with the world even stronger, so Iā€™m willing to put in more hours and work than I likely would have had I never faced any obstacles. Writing is also just a part of my way of life, so while it can be difficult and frustrating at times, it never feels like the kind of work that is draining. In fact, writing and the purpose and love I infuse behind it is what motivates so much of my life.Ā 

 

šŸ¦€ Your favorite writer today? Your least favorite one?

 

I canā€™t think of a least favorite writer, but I have so many I enjoy reading. In addition to the writers that I mentioned earlier who inspired me, I love reading Danielle L. Jensen, Donna Tartt, Kelly Link, and Leigh Bardugo among others.Ā Ā 

 

šŸ¦€ Does eating chocolate help write better books? If so, any specific type of chocolate you would recommend that writers should eat more often? I personally enjoy drinking hot cocoa before I go to bed. It gives me weird dreams.

 

I firmly believe eating chocolate helps with writing books along with many other things in life! I love milk chocolate truffles with the raspberry or strawberry filling, you know, the kind that you have to hunt for in the holiday chocolate boxes (which sometimes results inĀ  a disastrous mis-selection). Also I agree that eating sugar right before bed can induce the strangest dreams. I should know as Iā€™ve been guilty of this multiple times.Ā 

 

šŸ¦€ Thank you for taking this time to give us an insight on yourself and your passion for storytelling. Look forward to great things coming up!

 

Thank you for reaching out as well as taking the time to read my work and speak with me!Ā 

 

For anyone who is interested in following my writing journey further, I regularly give behind-the-scenes looks at my writing, publishing, and cover design process through my Dear Writing Diary series on Substack: katelynsam.substack.com.Ā 

 

I also regularly post on Instagram @_katelynsam_, and my website is katelynsam.com

 

An Interview with INFAMOUS

A Q & A with the Infamous Reviewer, GiošŸ¦€

 

Gio šŸ¦€ has been reviewing on Virtual Pulp for a little over a year now. He’s a prolific reviewer with a strong work ethic and sometimes eclectic tastes. He’s got his own fiction project in the works right now. Maybe this is overdue, but I think it’s a good idea to help his audience get to know him better, and find out about what he’s up to lately.

 

MACHINE TROOPER: First of all, you are a blessing to the writers of the world. I wish there were more readers like you out there and I probably speak for most of the authors you have reviewed. Seeing as how you’re not just a prolific reader but a prolific reviewer, and an honest one at that (so honest, you won’t even accept free review copies), I’m obligated to try figuring out what makes such a rare and selfless reader tick.

So what set you on this mission?

šŸ¦€ Honestly, it comes down to upbringing and my predisposition to listening to a good story being told. From a very young age my mother would often drop me off at my grandparentsā€™ to go to work while my father was out at sea in the Navy,Ā  and my grandma would read me books that ranged from Homer to the Brothers Grimm. Those afternoons exposed me for the first time to the magic of storytelling. As I grew up, my hunger for discovering books that would capture my imagination just grew exponentially. When we studied Homer in school I already knew about The Iliad and The Odyssey as much as our teacher did.

Now with social media and a platform my purpose really is kinda the same: find that next book, that next story that stirs up my imagination.Ā 

 

MACHINE TROOPER:Ā Again, glad to have you here.

Since you started reviewing on Virtual Pulp, the fantasy category has exploded in weight. Is that a favorite genre that you seek out more than others? Is it that most of the authors who contact you for reviews write in that genre? Or something else?

šŸ¦€ Fantasy is obviously what I read most but also perhaps the most popular genre in fiction literature currently. Most of my review requests I receive are for fantasy novels. Of course I have other reading interests (Jane Austen; Agatha Christie, to name a couple), but for the most part fantasy is obviously my main thing.

 

 

MACHINE TROOPER: It kinda’ looked that way to me.

You’ve read fiction from some of the legends in literature, as well as plenty of newish indie fiction.Ā  Have you noticed any general trends in the newer fiction–common strengths, weaknesses? Common or overused tropes?

 

šŸ¦€ I think a lot of new authors get stuck in a rut due to the bombardment from social mediaā€™s not-so-subliminal messages. It used to be that an author would draw inspiration from dreams, from traveling, from first hand experiences (or from those of others). Now the process is to pick up what’s already been written, take a few elements from this book and that book, blend them all together, and hope people will like the end result.Ā 

One of the most common overused tropes is that of having some kind of powerful trinket (amulet, stone, gem, sword, crown) and making it all about who can get their hands on it first. This trope has been used and abused to no end.

The strength in modern writing is the obvious instant access to information that writers have available, however that technical advantage is also partially responsible for the lack of original content. Writers used to draw inspiration from real-life experiences, from traveling, from having to stay at old motels in the middle of nowhere. They didn’t go online to see what was trending that day before writing their stories, if you catch my drift.

 

MACHINE TROOPER: Yup. There’s so much hopelessly derivative drivel out there now. Most of my creative efforts were derivative when I was a kid; but as you mature, you notice real life has so much inspiring experience–as you pointed out.

How do you decide what to review next?

 

šŸ¦€ I try to go in order of request placed, but truthfully sometimes I make exceptions depending on some factors. There are writers who request a review but in addition to that they want to speak to me about their books and depending on what they say I might take their books and move them up the queue because again, it goes back to me first and foremost searching for that story that is unapologetically original and written in such a manner that is unique in its own way.

 

MACHINE TROOPER: If you were to guesstimate, what proportion of books do you read because the author requested a review, versus how many you choose all on your own?

šŸ¦€50/50

 

MACHINE TROOPER: Do you still read any tradpub fiction? If so, who?

šŸ¦€ Not current tradpud fiction. I read a lot of classic Agatha Christie, Jane Austen,Ā  Lord Dunsany, Poe, and Lovecraft for the most part, when I’m not reviewing indie books.

 

MACHINE TROOPER: What are some of your favorite things to experience when reading a book or watching a movie? How have authors or directors managed to really ramp up your enjoyment of a story? Examples?

 

šŸ¦€ I like to expect the unexpected and unexpect the expected. What I mean by that is that I want to read stories and watch films that feel organic in their plot development and not just an amalgamation of previous existing stories and tropes blended together. I want to see writers disassociate their minds from how we communicate on social media and write in ways that are unique to their work (unless of course the story is about this world in present time).Ā 

Writing should be an art form not unlike singing, for example. Do singers sing like they talk? No. Same with writing. Don’t write like you post on Instagram or X. Make it an art form.

A good example of this is the last book I reviewed by Robert Mortell: Tales & Treasure. Though the book is not perfect in some aspects, Mortell seems to get that it’s time to move on in the fantasy genre and experiment with new concepts. The hunt for the crown in his story is just a facade, and even the characters in it know it. So the story is no longer about ā€œWho shall find the crown shall have infinite powerā€ but the hunt for this trinket becomes crucial for the characters/plot developing in ways that are fresh, compelling, and fascinating.

 

MACHINE TROOPER: Simply put, then: fresh narratives not built around a formula.

Do you read blurbs? I ask because they can be challenging to write and so many of them are bad. Can you generalize for us what elements in a blurb make you want to read a book (and conversely, what turns you off or makes it fall short, if you like)?

 

šŸ¦€ I do read blurbs and then I regret it! LOL! Honestly most blurbs today only make me feel like I should probably skip that book. I know it is hard to write blurbs that are effective without giving away too much of the story, but (sorry, have to mention him again) Rob Mortell proved that you can write blurbs that make you go like: ā€œI gotta read this book now!ā€ So Rob ,to me, also sets an example that there can be ways to write blurbs that are effective and intriguing. Is it an easy task? Absolutely not, but it’s doable.

 

MACHINE TROOPER: Remember that proposal you made to Iron Age Media? Could you reproduce it here for the blog followers?

šŸ¦€ Basically I DMā€™ed ā€˜The King’ with a proposal of featuring my book reviews on his zine but never got a response. I know he read it, but that’s water under the bridge.

 

MACHINE TROOPER: Now tell us if you’re ever going to do that. If not, why not?

 

šŸ¦€ Michael has a new book coming out soon. I’ll wait for that to release and do an interview with him.

 

MACHINE TROOPER:Ā  Thanks for answering those questions.Ā  Now let’s discuss your own current fiction project.

First of all: how and why were you motivated to tackle this subject matter in your first foray into fiction writing?

 

šŸ¦€ I was initially (and only partially) inspired by the modern feminist movement. But eventually the concept evolved into the creation of super Amazonian warriors rather than just a bunch of women who want to be like men. As more defined characters began to form in my mind I let the concept stir whichever direction it chose, organically.

 

MACHINE TROOPER: Most work that turns out to be worthwhile does take some surprising turns from what the writer originally envisioned.

Does the setting of this story take place on some version or alternate of Earth?

 

A: The setting is 100% pure fantasy world from my imagination, taking inspiration from The Iliad by Homer to Solomon Kane by R. E. Howard and everything in between. I think you may also find traces of E. R. Burroughs and H. P. Lovecraft here and there.Ā 

Oh and there will be mystical beaches, too. The most mysterious, enchanting beaches populated by not-too-friendly crustaceans!

 

MACHINE TROOPER: Nothing against Tolkien, but it’s always nice to discover people who understand that good literature existed before he came along.

Are you planning to eventually publish this story?

 

šŸ¦€ First of all I want to reiterate that everything that you read in Jerimath and Varian (and in the upcoming novel Scars) is simply the result of my ā€˜therapy programā€™. These characters and their stories have been living rent-free in my head for almost a year now, and I needed to find a way to let them out. This is therapy for me. So I decided to write down everything my imagination was creating in my sleep. I really don’t care what the ā€˜criticsā€™ may think of it nor am I trying to be a ā€˜writerā€™ in the sense that I’ll be constantly thinking of what to write next. I’m writing these stories and characters simply because they came to existence through my imagination in my dreams and I really needed an outlet for my own mental healthā€™s sake.

Having said all that, a long-format novel is also in the works, in cooperation with another writer, Jerimath and Varian providing just a glimpse into this fantastic world. With professional editing/proof-reading I would like to perhaps first make this short story available for free and then add it as a bonus to the long-format novel that is currently under construction.

 

MACHINE TROOPER:Ā  So this part is just you; but the full-length novel will be co-written with Fredo McBoxhead.

How did you come up with the term “Agogex”?

 

 

šŸ¦€ The term was inspired by Agoge, a military program/training system in ancient Sparta. It was kinda fitting, given the military nature of this caste of women. Partial credit goes to Scars co-writer James for coming up with that idea.

 

MACHINE TROOPER: Who are the “Aratex”?

 

šŸ¦€ The Aratex are the ā€˜mindā€™ of the nation of Carriala (whereas the Agogex are the ā€˜armā€™ of Carriala). Aratex is a caste of men picked at birth to basically become eunuchs and fulfill vital roles as statesmen, lawmakers, scientists, architects. They will make an appearance in Scars, the long-format story I mentioned earlier, which will be mostly written by co-writer James.Ā 

 

MACHINE TROOPER: Jeez, you make it hard not to draw parallels between this and Current Year geopolitics.

You’ve been borderline-obsessed with crabs since you reviewed that one RVM story. Your characters even refer to “the Holy Crab” in this book. What is the deal with you and crabs?

 

šŸ¦€ I wouldn’t say just borderline obsessed (LOL), but yes, ever since I read R. V. Miller’s short story The Isle of the Shrine of the Sick’ning Scarab (I know, long title!) I became infatuated with mystical islands and red crabs to the point that I was having dreams (or nightmares? Your pick) about not just red crabs but walking on these otherworldly ā€˜Lovecraftianā€™ sandy beaches with more red crabs than one can count. Those were the same dreams by which these characters and stories I’m writing originated from.

At the time I discussed this with Mills and he even suggested using the ā€˜mystical red crabā€™ as my brand logo. And so I did.

Scars: an INFAMOUS Legend will zero in on the whole red crab legend more in depth once Agogex Master Megax takes the leading role in that storyline.

 

 

MACHINE TROOPER: Henceforth shall I remember this origin every time I dine at Red Lobster.

It seems Larizza (and now Megax, in this draft) is pretty brutish–if not retarded. Is this a result of the sorcery that altered her hormones and DNA to make her ripped and hyper-masculine? Or was she this way from birth?

šŸ¦€ All Agogex speak in the same ā€˜strange tongue’ which baffles even the men of Greater Valley. Again this particular mystery will be revealed in the long novel in due time, but for now I can only say that their speech is not due to a mental disorder or birth defect, or because they are foreigners (they’re not), or because they are just meatheads, even.Ā 

Agogex are very smart and cunning. Not only do they possess superhuman strength and endurance but they are also very apt for military strategy development and leadership on the battlefield. Agogex never end up being common soldiers. There are not a whole lot of them, they’re an elite, and they are all raised and trained to make it to the ranks of captain and general.

 

 

MACHINE TROOPER: Okay, I’ll be patient to find out.

In the duel between Jerimath and Larizza, the High Knight is full of bluster (or braggadocio?) beforehand, then refuses to make any offensive effort. Even as he tires from evading the attacks of the Agogex (who has nigh-unlimited stamina), he still refuses to counterattack. Regardless of the effectiveness of the fighting discipline, or the skill of its practicioner, an attack–especially a failed one, opens you up for a counterstrike. (This is how Max Schmelling beat Joe Louis in their first bout, for instance, and how Ken Shamrock beat Dan Severn.) Yet Jerimath limits himself to defense after, presumably, many such openings. Is he a white knight deep down, despite the bluster? Is he mesmerized by her eyes? Can he not overcome his conditioning to not hit a girl? I am a bit perplexed and, to be honest, this reminds me too much of the Homowood trope of the trash-talking 220 pound tough guy who gets his ass kicked by the five-foot-nothing Amazon superninja.

šŸ¦€ Jerimath at this point is only aware of the unnatural strength of Larizza, but he doesn’t suspect that Agogex have almost infinite endurance as well. His plan was to let her swing at him long enough to tire her out, then disarm her. Notice how he tells Varian:Ā 

 

ā€œLet me teach this silly child a lessonā€

 

He obviously has no intentions to seriously hurt her. Also notice what he says to Larizza after he is hit and gets back on his feet:

 

ā€œLarizza, I do not want to harm you. I am just seeking justice. If you lay down your weapons now no harm shall come to you or your men. The Tower is as just as it is merciful. I give you my word as a High Knight and Paladin of The Tower.ā€

 

Jerimath is doing two things here:

  • Giving Larizza a genuine chance to surrender.
  • Gaining precious minutes to regain some gas, would he not be given any other chance but to strike her. He is speaking to her while in the back of his head he is also calculating his next move now that he is within striking range. Larizza is being fooled into thinking he is done at this point.

 

You also have to keep in mind two factors:

  • High Knights are raised to respect women, all women
  • There is something going on when Jerimath looks into Larizzaā€™s eyes but he is not even fully aware of it at a conscious level. Attraction? Agogex sorcery? Something else? Gotta keep reading part 2 to find out.

 

MACHINE TROOPER:Ā  If Jerimath is truly concerned with justice, why does he choose to let the Carrealans off scott-free rather than see Larizza punished?

šŸ¦€ Jerimath wants to see justice being served, but not the Agogex version of it , with unsolicited torture. His decision to pardon Larizza of her crimes is made in the spur of the moment because he only has seconds to do something that would prevent the flogging to take place. As a Captain of The Tower he has power to pardon a criminal in certain circumstances and so he uses that power.Ā 

Oh and of course the ā€˜EYESā€™ thingy I’m sure has something to do with it also!

 

MACHINE TROOPER:Ā  I appreciate you taking the time to “chat” with me about your reviews and your work-in-progress.

 

Follow Gio and watch for his collaborative fantasy project, Scars, to come out in the future, of which this tale of Jerimath and Varian will be a part.

A Chat With Comics Odyssey

Since I’ve been an author, this is only my third guest appearance on a podcast. It’s my very first video livestream. My first was with Winston Crutchfield (a stand-up guy) back in 2011 or so. My next was circa 2015.Ā  After that, I figured, “There, I’ve done it. Now I can go back into hibernation.”

As my wife and other family will tell you, I don’t really like being in the spotlight. I want people to buy my books and give them nice reviews, allowing me to stay sequestered like a hermit while I work on projects important to me. But those desires are pretty much mutually exclusive in today’s entertainment sphere.

I’m an unknown rookie in comic books, yet I have to start building an audience now so that some readers will come to back my campaign when my graphic novel is ready for the printer. You gotta have a crowd before you can crowdfund, as the saying goes. So I put a profile pic up on my social media accounts showing my face instead of the cool avatars I prefer to use, and I’m reaching out to podcasters/livestreamers for interviews.

Kudos to Ulysses of Comics Odyssey for his laid back approach and his own passion for comics which made the whole experience enjoyable.

Thanks again to Ulysses for giving me a shot and his time to make this happen. This might have been the perfect way for me to get my feet wet.

I hope you all will show him some love with likes and reposts. Also, he’s working on a comic project of his own now you might consider checking out when he finishes.

And hey, did you know the Paradox digital”box set” is published? At an everyday bargain price, too.

Leave a comment if you liked the interview, and/or if you would buy a doorstop-sized paperback or hardcover of Paradox if I make one available.

Interview with the Brothers Krynn

Interviewed by

šŸ¦€: Both of you gentlemen are like writing machines, with a very extensive body of work. So why did you choose Crown of Blood as your first published title?

 

Joseph & Daniel: It seemed a short project and one we both liked, so we just did it.Ā 

šŸ¦€: The book revolves around the bloody history of the crown of Caledonia (now Scotland). Why did you decide to focus on that particular region to develop your story on?

 

Joseph: Because weā€™re part Scottish and since I first began studying Scottish Medieval history & folklore I developed a strong sense of kinship with the Scots, and could not resist developing something of a mythology for them.Ā 

šŸ¦€: Even though Crown of Blood is structured into short stories, they’re all part of a larger tale. Did you feel like this wouldn’t have worked as well if it were to be presented as just one long story divided into chapters instead?

 

Joseph & Daniel: No, it would not have worked half as well, due to us having to stick to one overall narrative/set of characters rather than dancing between all the characters that we follow the perspective of in the story. That, and it would have been even more confusing in our view.Ā 

šŸ¦€: As a reader progresses into the book, more characters and more names are being introduced, and sometimes many characters have the same names as their predecessors. Did you not consider that at some point things could get a little confusing for readers in general?

 

Joseph: Yeah, and it’s why for the sequel and next edition weā€™re planning to add a family tree and a map.Ā 

šŸ¦€: I was particularly fascinated by the ā€˜three cronesā€™ that keep appearing here and there throughout the book. Who are they really and what are their origins?

 

Daniel: The three crones are from Shakespeare, they are the three hags that corrupt Macbeth in the play, except weā€™ve set them up in our world. As to their origin, not sure weā€™ve fully developed all the ideas for their backstory, but weā€™re currently working on it.Ā 

 

šŸ¦€: Today there seems to be confusion about what the image of the classic knight should look like. If you had to condense the elements that cannot be altered from the model of the classic knight, how would you do that?

 

Joseph: Honourable, intelligent and bold, and utterly devout. Iā€™d say Aragorn, Roland and also the likes of Conan the Cimmerian are all good examples of classic knights.Ā 

šŸ¦€: With modern feminism, we have seen a rise in both literature and entertainment to create female heroines, soldiers, and knights. These women are basically doing what men do in every aspect. Do you think that is how we ought to portray ā€˜strong womenā€™?

 

Joseph: Nope. We ought to portray women as feminine. We can portray women as fierce warriors but must never forget to write flawed and human women, who struggle just as men do but who have a certain femininity about them. Honestly feminism has ruined female heroes.Ā 

šŸ¦€: Speaking of strong women, it is no secret that my all time favorite strong woman is Joan of Arc. But she never even killed one man in battle (though got wounded herself on the battlefield twice) and she is not known for her skills in combat or sword fighting. Yet her strength humbles me and inspires me daily. Why is someone like Joan not praised today (not even by women!) despite the fact that our society is constantly looking for superheroines for inspiration?

 

 

Joseph: Because for one thing Jehanne was a pious woman who looked to God, and society has lost touch with God. What is more is that Jehanne was a gentle woman who loved her nation, and to love oneā€™s nation is also out of style in our modern times. Jehanne thus represents everything that is antithetical to modernity and liberalism; a pious, kindly, feminine and nationalistic woman who sacrificed for others.Ā 

šŸ¦€:Ā  When can we expect your next official publication to come out and what is it going to be about?

 

Daniel & Joseph: Not sure…Joeā€™s hoping to have Darkspire Conspiracy published some time next year. And weā€™re thinking around January or February to have Crown of Blood Part 2 finished and hopefully published. After that? Weā€™re also hoping to publish around December the first book of Olympnomachi, a massive Silmarillion epic Joeā€™s been working on for years.Ā 

 

šŸ¦€:Ā Thank you Joseph and Daniel, I’m very proud of you and what you are doing is perhaps even more noble than you can see right now. Your writing tells me that NEW LEGENDS are being made!

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We Have a Winner!! (Infamous Contest)

INFAMOUSšŸ¦€ REVIEWER Short Story Contest Winner:

MOTHER

by Sarah Kirk Pierzchala

 

Q1: Sarah, first of all let me tell you that choosing a winner was no easy task for us, but in the end I was very happy it was your story for a few reasons. Can you tell us more about the origins of Mother?

 

Sarah: First, let me thank you for offering this opportunity for us writers to participate in such a fun contest! Iā€™ve never had much success writing stories to prompts, but as soon as I read the parameters for this competition, the setting swiftly formed in my mindā€™s eye and the different elements fell into place pretty soon after that.

 

Q2: The 1st act, as Henry also pointed out, very much reminds me of that 20-ish minute intro in the original Planet of The Apes (1968). We were both taken by how you handled that part of the story: the lone adventurer exploring a new world. What or who inspired you to go that route?

 

Sarah: This story is more ā€˜pulpyā€™ than I normally write, so I definitely wanted to capture that sense of mystery, adventure and survival. There was certainly some influence from ā€˜60ā€™s films like Jules Verneā€™s ā€œMysterious Islandā€, but I also just imagined what I might feel as that character in that situation. Also, since Iā€™ve written an entire novel that mostly takes place on a small island with limited characters, I knew how important it is to make the story location itself almost as developed as its own character.

 

Q3: The main character is a woman who apparently was not at the top of her class in the academy. What then drove her to keep going and stay alive in such dire circumstances?

 

Sarah: Obviously, anyone who made it through an exobiologist program would meet some minimum psychological requirements to survive in a situation like that. Think how rigorously NASA selects and trains their astronauts! Also, her natural curiosity about the location helped her to not panic and give up.

Q4: For me the deciding factor to award your story 1st place was how you combined the ā€˜crabā€™ element with the ā€˜islandā€™ element in such a creative way I personally didn’t see it coming until the very end. Where did that specific idea come from or was that something you had already brewing in the back of your mind?

 

Sarah: For me, seeing those words in proximity just handed the premise to me without requiring much effort on my part. The main challenge was to develop the drama and sense of wonder within the space constraints.

Q5: The big question now is, can we hope to see more of this universe come to life? I feel like between the MC, the island, the crabs, and the entire element of mystery there could be a lot more to explore here.

 

Sarah: I hadnā€™t really thought about that, but Iā€™m delighted it made such an impression on you! I really enjoyed crafting the protagonist and creating the relationship between her and her environment, so who knowsā€”there could be more to come some day!

Note from Henry: Gio is right–it was very difficult to pick a winner. All the submissions were solid and fun. We have showcased the work of these talented authors (and many others) on Virtual Pulp, and from our interactions with them came this contest. The quality of these entries reflects on how good Gio is at sniffing out the literary treasures in the colossal slush pile that is the e-book market of today.

Q&A with J. Sebastian King

(Author of BRIDGEHOUSE)

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Q1: First thing that strikes me most about Bridgehouse is how professional it comes across when reading its content. Hard to believe this is your first publication. Can you tell us more about your writing background?

 

King:Ā I’ve always been into storytelling, especially in movies.Ā  I went to film school (both theory and production) because it offered the broadest applicability.Ā  The rules of good screenwriting and stage direction, blocking, etc., apply to all the forms, whether it’s a novel, comic, moving image or interactive experience.Ā  I didn’t go into the film industry (blech), but I got what I wanted out of the degree.

As for actual writing, I did NaNoWriMo for a few years until I got bored of it.Ā  I wouldn’t show off any of that work, but it taught me how to crank out a serious word count on a daily basis.Ā  That put something on Bridgehouse‘s scale within grasping distance.

That’s about it for background, really.

Putting aside the novel’s development (a story in itself), I just wanted it to be as good as I could make it, and being broke means I have to wear all the hats.Ā  Paying customers expecting quality won’t accept excuses like not being able to afford an editor or typesetter or whoever, so I had to become proficient at all of it.

Mostly, I just didn’t allow myself to get away with being lazy or dishonest about problems.

Still, Bridgehouse does have some rough patches that a pro editor would likely balk at.Ā  I’ve already corrected those bad habits in my current work, and I’d love to some day do a revised edition of the novel with that extra half-percent of polish applied, and maybe with illustrations just for fun.

Q2: Here we have three main storylines which ever so slowly begin to converge in ways that leave the reader in awe, to say the least. How did that concept come about?

 

King:Ā The narrative braid was a central conceit from relatively early on.

Catherine’s story is the oldest part both in fiction and truth, since I began working on it circa 2014, but it got set aside for a while.

Pon’s story came next, beginning sometime in 2015 or 2016, and was initially unrelated to Catherine’s altogether.Ā  His story went through the greatest evolution, growing in scope and scale the more I poked at it.Ā  I’d originally envisioned it only needing around 25k words to tell!Ā  Hilarious, given that just his introduction chapter in the Overture is nearly 10k.

Also, it was more obviously science fiction in its earliest form.Ā  Proto-Pon lived on a standard-issue sci-fi colony world, though the intelligence arc and overall journey plots were the same.

Then came the idea to combine the two stories, and Catherine’s tale became the backstory to Pon’s setting.Ā  From there, his turned increasingly fantastical the more I worked on it and the more I took the time scales seriously.

Qona’s story emerged during the development of Pon’s.Ā  Proto-Rado already existed as the typical Magic Helper, but proto-Qona was only a nameless background character, with her role being something like Moses’s sister Miriam.Ā  At that point, Lilia wasn’t much more than a love interest motivation for Pon.

But then, while I was massaging the event that became the Vei’id Wohen, I realized I could do something really cool with the proto-Qona if I promoted her to first-class character with her own arc and setting.

Thus, Qona Itarte was born.

I thought the neatest way to present the resulting super-story was something like a crab canon—which is a kind of musical palindrome where an arrangement and its backwards complement are played at the same time.Ā  So Pon and Qona’s stories began spiraling around each other, and Catherine’s story made the third strand of the braid.

Everything fell into place after that, though it still took several years of pondering and false starts before the first draft began in 2022.

Q3: Qona Itarte is a main character that seems to embrace the mantle of a national hero, a legend, and even a martyr. What inspired this character originally?

King:Ā Qona is something of an Athena; she popped out of my head as a fully-formed symbol, though I didn’t fully understand what that symbol meant until I was approaching the climax in the first draft.

In the particulars, she’s very much my synthesis of the ancient Sumerian goddess Inana/Ishtar and the princesses NausicaƤ and Kushana, from Miyazaki’s NausicaƤ of the Valley of the Wind (the manga, not the film, which has a very different Kushana).

Symbolically, though I wasn’t thinking in these terms at the time, what I wanted was a kind of Queen David or Solomon, an inspiring, near-superhuman world-shaping leader who is nonetheless fatally human, whose mistakes and failures are as consequential as her victories and whose spirit is greater than her flesh.

She ended up stealing the show, so I think I got it right.

Q4: Essentially this book could be labeled as sci-fi but really incorporates other genres into it. It feels as though you wanted to write science fiction, but also sword and sorcery and perhaps space opera like Star Wars, and Bridgehouse was the result. Is that even close to how you look at it?

 

King:Ā I subscribe to the notion that fantasy and science fiction are both subcategories of speculative fiction, diverging in one fundamental way: fantasy exists in an unknowable universe, and SF exists in a knowable one.

The setting of Bridgehouse is a knowable universe.

I like to fancy it hard science fiction, but perhaps crunchy science fiction is more honest, and the completed three-volume story will probably be correctly labeled space opera.

I do my best to adhere to known physics; thermodynamics is a first-class concern, relativity applies, etc.Ā  But, especially in Pon’s story, I don’t explain things that way, if I explain them at all.

As an example, in Chapter 15 (Crest), the river leading to Highest-Home is hot and muggy for days, the karst-landscape valley filled with a stinking mist that later clears.Ā  That mist is created by waste heat being pumped into the river by a mysterious process occurring ‘off-screen’, but I only use it as environmental description.Ā  Readers who have reached the end of the book can guess at the nature of that process.

That said, one of my favorite books and biggest inspirations is Vernor Vinge’s A Fire Upon the Deep, and what really struck me was how Vinge used character perspective to achieve a really slick fantasy flair atop a serious sci-fi story.

The genre-jamming in Bridgehouse is a deliberate use of this effect.Ā  Catherine’s story feels like traditional hard sci-fi because that is the world she perceives, Pon’s story feels like fantasy grounded in myth because that is the world he perceives, and Qona’s story carries an operatic mode because she lives in the decline of a post-Singularity galaxy of wonders.

Books Two and Three continue the genre-mixing trend, including proper space opera; I’m hoping to achieve a full Macross moment by the end.

The downside is that it makes explaining the book in a succinct way very difficult.

Q5: What I admire the most is the scope and ā€˜massivenessā€™ of this project. It was also what initially made me doubt the outcome. But you proved me wrong. Is there any advice you can give to upcoming independent authors in order to never lose control of their ship, for lack of a better term?

 

King:Ā I’m still riding this particular boat, and Book Two is a much more ambitious and complex work than Bridgehouse, so any advice I give might be flawed.

Nonetheless, I am an admirer of the aviator and writer Antoine de Saint-ExupĆ©ry, author of The Little Prince.Ā  He believed in a beautiful premise, which he stated as, ā€œPerfection is achieved, not when there is nothing more to add, but when there is nothing left to take away.ā€

Bridgehouse readers will note his full name is Antoine Marie Jean-Baptiste Roger.

In practice, don’t worry about hitting every note during the first draft.Ā  Focus on getting the core narrative down first, with clear story beats and a well-defined structure, and resist the urge to overly world-build.

Then, during revisions, you can figure out what the story actually needs.Ā  If it has too much, cut what doesn’t help the story.Ā  If it needs something more, add only the minimum needed to make the story work.

That’s much easier when you’re working backwards from a tangible ending.

As an example, in Bridgehouse, the mechstrosities present a major environmental threat.Ā  Though they were always planned for the story, they never appear in the first draft.Ā  In fact, the first time I wrote them was in an early chapter of Book Two!

Also, Kalas disappeared after Chapter 9, most of the Angel Bay men were nameless background characters, the Sorceress Jevim didn’t exist nor did any of the Anjhall Security soldiers we follow through the war.Ā  Watru only came into being the moment I needed a medic in Chapter 12, and Ladhe appeared in revisions to support his new sections.Ā  Poor Braedh was never seen at all.

If I’d tried to juggle all of that on the first draft I would have been completely bogged down in the details and wasted a lot of time trying to develop characters without a clear goal for many of them.Ā  Each piece was added only after I worked backward from the ending and determined something in the narrative was lacking.

The first draft took three months.Ā  Revisions took over a year.

Q6: As I wrote in my review, your approach to story writing at times reminds me of another indie author, James Krake. You both seem to be very pragmatic and very analytical. Do you make a conscious effort to pay attention to even the slightest details that go into a story?

 

King:Ā Of course.Ā  Everything is there for a reason, or in some cases many reasons, some of which won’t become clear until the later books.Ā  Even the occasional oblique cultural references are carefully chosen for secret meanings.

Bridgehouse generated about 30k words of notes during revisions, and the glossary features around five thousand words of extraneous details I just thought were fun to include somewhere.

 

Q7: Finally, I want to thank you for not only blessing me with a new great universe that I thoroughly enjoyed, but for proving me wrong when I was convinced this book was going to be a FAIL! What can we expect in Book Two and can we hope to still see Qona, without giving too much away?

 

King:Ā I’m glad you enjoyed it.Ā  I know the story’s length is a big reader investment, and I aimed to reward that investment.

Book Two continues right where Bridgehouse leaves off, following Catherine, Lilia, Pon and Amata, and we’ll also meet new main characters in new storylines.

The narrative katamari keeps rolling and the scale keeps increasing.Ā  We’ll explore the Many Worlds and Bridges, meet the Starborne and learn more about the natures of the Vei’id Wohen and what the people of LW642 called the Isema System.Ā  There will be space battles, Deadworld ruin explorers, a cute intrepid space girl, high weirdness, cosmic horror, betrayals, tragic revelations and devastating victories.

And romance, of course.

As for Qona, I’ll point out that the Codetta ends with her rose chapter emblem as a cadence.

Book two’s tentative title is Matron of the Many Worlds.

It will probably be published in 2025.Ā  The first draft is done, but just as with Bridgehouse the bulk of the work is in the revision process.Ā  Even in rough form it can knock your socks off, though!Ā  It’s going to be great.

In the meantime I have two other, much more modest books I’m prioritizing for release this year.

One is the first in a series of planned Bridgehouse-related novels, collectively titled Malin and the Sorcerers of Virsh.Ā  (I call it MatSoV.)Ā  It tells the story of Malin ir Malin and his equine Crashing-Storm as they begin a return home following the events in Pon’s story.Ā  It’s canonical to the other books but outside the scope of the proper sequels, and can be read independent of Bridgehouse.

It will be a pure sword and sorcery pulp serial, with a straightforward and focused narrative.Ā  This first book will be somewhere in the range of 60 to 70k words, so relatively bite-sized.Ā  I’m in revisions now, plan to get it into beta-reader hands in July and will likely publish this autumn at the latest.

The other book is a semi-secret project I’m taking a completely different production approach with.Ā  It’s a fast-paced noble-bright pulp space opera thing that might be comparable in length to the MatSoV book, but I’m still cranking on the first draft so it’s hard to say.Ā  I’d like to get it out this year.

 

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Interview with Author Paul Leone

Q1:What inspired The Dweller in Drury Lane? Are there any other related works that precede or follow this that might help further explore these legends you are creating?

 

Leone: Both Yaā€™el and Renee and Innocence appeared in previous stories, and I thought putting their tales (including a few new ones) side by side would make for an interesting contrast. Theyā€™re all part of my Immortal Champions setting, which starts off in my novella The Governess of Greenmere and continues in the short story collections The Hungry Dead of YĆ¼-Ching and Other Stories, Kung Fu Antipopes and Other Strange Stories, The Third Crown and Other Weird Tales and Webs and Shadows: Strange Stories of Barsetshire.

Q1/2: So where do we first encounter Ya’el, Renee, and Innocence?

Leone: Yaā€™el is first mentioned in ā€œThe Holy Woman of the Westā€ in The Third Crown, while Renee and Innocence debut in ā€œA Ride in Barsetshireā€ in Webs and Shadows.

Q2: The first thing one notices when reading The Dweller is your prose. How did you develop such a magnificent prosaic style? How do you manage to completely block out all traces of modern-day euphemisms and urban jargon in your writing?

Leone: I think itā€™s a combination of reading (a lot) and writing (a lot). Find an author or two who write like you want to, and just immerse yourself in their works. In my case, I aimed to imitate J.R.R. Tolkienā€™s writing style, especially in the first half of The Return of the King.Ā 

Q3: Who was Ya’el before becoming an Immortal Champion? How did she become an Immortal Champion?

Leone: Yaā€™elā€™s background is still a little foggy to me, but she was the daughter of a shepherd in the 2nd century BC. After an encounter with one of the night people (my general term for vampires, witches and other evil beings), she met Nimrod (then the Champion of the Holy Land) and became his student and eventual successor.

Q3/2: What exactly is a Champion and where did the idea come from?

Leone: Immortal Champions are the chosen servants and warriors of the Angels of Limbo (or Sheol, as Yaā€™el calls it; thereā€™s many different names). Long ago, the ā€˜neutral angelsā€™ were cast out of Heaven for not taking a side in Satanā€™s rebellion, and some of them have since decided to atone for their cowardice by helping humanity against the minions of the Devil. There are 72 Champions all around the world who use their powers (immortality, greater physical abilities, and what might be called ā€˜magicā€™) to protect mankind. The basic idea has been in my brain for almost 20 years ā€“ what if the Slayers from Buffy the Vampire Slayer were put into an explicitly Christian setting? ā€“ and grew until I came up with Elise from The Governess of Greenmere and then her various peers.

Q4: I personally fell in love with the character of Coem from Hibernia. She comes from a land where the Gospel hasn’t spread yet (65 AD), but she does wear her heart on her sleeve and comes off as a young girl with a strong mind. Any possible spinoffs featuring her specifically that you might bless us with in the future?

Leone: Thank you! Sheā€™s one of my favorites, too. I do have some plans for her adventures in the Roman Empire, possibly with Victoria of Alexandria, or perhaps later on in history when she meets a certain British-born evangelist in early medieval Ireland.

Q5: Renee and Innocence–are they too Immortal Champions of Sheol? And if not, how are they able to fight the forces of evil the way we see it done in the second half of The Dweller? What exactly sets them apart?

Leone: Renee and Innocence are ordinary mortals. Renee is blessed with luck, a quick wit, and being born into a wealthy family with an indulgent father. Innocence, on the other hand, is a poor country girl (and as a Puritan in Restoration England, doubly looked down on), but her devout faith gives her a power over many things they face.

Q6: As I’ve mentioned to you before, I did read another of your novellas a couple of years ago-The Governess of Greenmere-but truthfully I did not see or notice any of the amazing writing I witnessed in The Dweller. Do you think I was distracted and should go back and re-read it or has your writing changed much ever since that book?

Leone: I wrote that several years ago now and like to think Iā€™ve improved, but I definitely recommend giving it another shot! Thereā€™s some passages in it that Iā€™m fond of. (Iā€™d also recommend Webs and Shadows, especially the story ā€œSigriđ Sigdansdohtor and the Wolf of the Lobbewealdā€)

Q7: In closing, Paul I can’t stop expressing my gratitude for getting me inspired while reading your book. You embody everything I work and preach (no pun) every day both in my personal life and my social media life. I want to believe that this world, with all its evil, sin, depravity, and THE AGENDA, still hosts men and women who uphold higher standards for everything that is sacred, everything that is holy, everything that is immortal.

What’s next that we can look forward to? And needless to say, I hope this is just the beginning of having you on Virtual Pulp to promote more NEW LEGENDS IN THE MAKING!

Leone: Thank you very much! Iā€™m very glad you hold the book in such regard. As for whatā€™s next, Iā€™ve got a couple more Immortal Champions short story collections coming eventually. Stay tuned and God bless.

Q&A with Arthur Shattuck O’Keefe

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Virtual Pulp consistently reviews hidden gems in the cyber-slush pile of online book shopping. Independent authors who you might have never heard of otherwise get their books in the spotlight. The Infamous Gio occasionally gives them a microphone, too, when he conducts interviews. Recently Gio got independent author Shattuck O’Keefe to give an in-depth interview, and is sharing it with you today.

Q1: The Spirit Phone is your first published full-length novel. Why this book and why now?

 

O’Keefe: As for why this book: The idea for it hit me suddenly one day in August 2009, and I couldnā€™t let go of it.Ā 

As for why now: It really should have been much earlier, but from the time I conceived of it, various life events got in the way of getting it written. I finally got a complete draft done in early 2019, then managed to land a publishing agreement with BHC Press in late 2020, with the release in November 2022. (The audiobook, which came out the following June, earned Daniel Penz, the narrator, a 2023 Voice Arts Award.)

Iā€™ve always loved books, and I decided to write a novel. Iā€™ve long enjoyed speculative fiction as well as allegedly true tales of the supernatural. (Even if you take the latter with a grain of salt, they make for interesting reading.) Iā€™d been mulling over ideas for several years, and one day I was re-reading my copy of Phantom Encounters, a volume of the popular Time-Life book series called Mysteries of the Unknown. It contains a chapter on the alleged ā€œspirit phone,ā€ a device to attempt communication with the dead which Thomas Edison claimed in interviews that he had been trying to develop. Suddenly the idea hit me: What if Edison had actually built such a device, and what if it worked? That could be the premise of a novel, I thought. So, I wrote it.

Edison is a key supporting character, while the protagonists are occultist Aleister Crowley and inventor Nikola Tesla, who investigate the secrets of the spirit phone as its users increasingly fall prey to insanity and suicide.

In the course of my research for the book, I learned about a claim circulating online that Edison stole the spirit phone idea from Tesla. There is no evidence for this whatsoever. I wrote about it in an article posted on Medium.

Thereā€™s also a short story connected to The Spirit Phone, titled ā€œA Spirited Conversation,ā€ which appeared in the literary magazine The Stray Branch (Fall/Winter 2021). The magazine is in print form only, but the full text can be read on my website. It previously appeared in Suspense Magazine (Summer 2020), though itā€™s a slightly different version than the 2021 publication, which I consider definitive. There is a beautifully done audio recording of ā€œA Spirited Conversationā€ by The Spirit Phone audiobook narrator Daniel Penz. Itā€™s a little over 16 minutes long.Ā 

 

Q2: the way I found your book was purely coincidental. I was looking for new content to cover and (as I often do) I was reading some of the Amazon reviews on The Spirit Phone, when this specific reviewer caught my attention byĀ  negatively highlighting the lack of female characters in your book. I knew immediately I had to get you on VP!Ā 

What do you think of this modern trend that requires or even demands at times that authors meet a particular demographic representation quota in their stories?

 

O’Keefe: I donā€™t agree that a novel or short story must reflect a demographic checklist to be a ā€œproperā€ work of fiction. Though if, as a reader, the lack of some category of human or other is a deal-breaker for you, so be it. Thereā€™s no such thing as a novel that will appeal to everyone.Ā 

Your question reminds me of one review (really a non-review) of The Spirit Phone which listed the book as a DNF simply because the reviewer couldnā€™t get interested in characters who were white men. Nothing whatsoever is mentioned about plot, premise, editing, dialogue, world-building, or anything else that makes a novel a novel. I canā€™t consider that to be a book review. If you label a novel unreadable simply because you find the skin color or sex of the characters objectionable, you have not evaluated the novel. That, in a nutshell, is the problem with trying to assign ā€œdiversityā€ requirements to a book. Still, I find this to be the exception rather than the rule in the reviews Iā€™ve read.Ā Ā 

Besides, diversity of characters is not just things like race, sex, and sexual orientation. There are the charactersā€™ motives, objectives, personal values, temperaments, skills, etc. The protagonists of The Spirit Phone are historical figures. Aleister Crowley was a hedonistic, smart-aleck, pipe-smoking, drug-using adventurer who delved into the occult. He set mountaineering altitude records in an era before bottled oxygen and high-tech winter clothing. Nikola Tesla was a straightlaced, germophobic, non-smoking, work-obsessed genius who made invaluable contributions to electrical invention. Their personalities were very different, and thatā€™s the kind of diversity I tried to depict in my novel. If you want the more ā€œstandardā€ usage of diversity, Crowleyā€™s bisexuality and Teslaā€™s apparent celibacy are alluded to, but these aspects are included because thatā€™s part of who they were, not for the purpose of satisfying a perceived diversity checklist. Horror author Terence Taylor expressed a view similar to my own on this point in his review of The Spirit Phone for Nightmare Magazine.

As for the particular review you mention, by horror author and editor Amanda Lyons, I see it as a mixed review rather than a panning of the book. There is also praise, and I actually thanked her for it. However, I disagree with the portion quoted below, which I think partly exemplifies the issue you mention:

ā€œFor my own tastes this was a bit dry and impersonal and I was chagrined to find very few female characters (and that those who were there came in the form of uncouth harpies and demons at the beck and call of male sorcerers).ā€

Itā€™s unclear what ā€œpersonalā€ elements are seen as missing, so Iā€™ll skip that. As for the rest: Female supporting characters include Sadie the bookseller, who is indispensable in helping Crowley and Tesla. There are two female demons: Lirion and Elerion. Yes, they are bound to male mages (Crowley and antagonist Ambrose Temple, respectively), but Lirion voluntarily goes beyond the scope of her obligations to help Crowley and Tesla, while Elerionā€“also in freely choosing to aid the protagonistsā€“gives Temple the ultimate dressing down as she declares herself absolved of serving him. This is after she telekinetically snaps the neck of a monster that tries to sexually harass her. Thus, the female demons are much more than simply things to be used by the male mages. There is also Martha, a woman who is crucial in highlighting the moral bankruptcy of Temple and his plan. The only female characters who could reasonably meet the ā€œshrill harpiesā€ description are two in total: one female spirit contacted through the spirit phone and a young woman who Crowley and Tesla encounter in New Jersey. So, with all due respect to Ms. Lyons as a far more prolific author of fiction than myself, I canā€™t agree with her on this point.Ā 

When I read that review, I was reminded of an academic paper Iā€™d written on the female characters of Ernest Hemingwayā€™s unfinished story (possibly intended as a novel) ā€œThe Last Good Country.ā€ In it, I quote a paper by literature professor Margaret Bauer, who states:

ā€œHemingway is often criticized for his one-dimensional characterization of the women in his fiction. I would suggest that such critics are actually arguing with Hemingwayā€™s choice of focus. The problem they have with Hemingwayā€™s female characters is not that they are one-dimensional (the numerous studies of them suggest otherwise), but that they are usually not central characters. I would argue that it is the writerā€™s prerogative as to whose story he or she is most interested in telling.ā€

I agree with Professor Bauer, and I think her reasoning applies to either a literary giant like Hemingway or an obscure ā€œgenre fictionā€ debut novelist such as myself. Besides, there is no shortage of books with female protagonists in various genres, including fantasy, science fiction, and horror, if thatā€™s what youā€™re looking for.Ā 

Anyway, mixed reviews or bad reviews are a fact of life. Even the Harry Potter books were roundly condemned by Harold Bloom, perhaps the most famous and influential of American literary critics.

Q3: speaking of modern, what I loved about The Spirit Phone is the respect you showed for the period of time/locations where the story takes place. New York, her streets, restaurants, hotels, daily papers, everything is so detailed and so faithful to that time. Do you feel it’s important to keep that level of historical faithfulness even in alternate history fiction?

 

O’Keefe: Yes. With the caveat that I think of The Spirit Phone as a cross-genre novel, it is among other things an alternate history tale, and I think itā€™s important to strive for historical accuracy. If youā€™re going to depict the year 1899 without an effort to do so accurately, why bother calling it the year 1899? Unless, of course, you introduce anachronistic aspectsā€“historical inaccuraciesā€“as a deliberate decision in the service of the story.

One way to do this is to have the entire world be ā€œopenlyā€ anachronistic, such as in William Gibson & Bruce Sterlingā€™s novel The Difference Engine: The computer (a steam-powered variety) has become a reality in the 19th century, resulting in a global political order which includes a much more powerful British Empire, an independent Confederacy, and a Marxist republic on Manhattan Island. Another example of this approach is Bonsart Bokelā€™s Association of Ishtar series.

In The Spirit Phone, which is set in 1899, I tried to make the publicly known technology, infrastructure, political situation, etc. the same as our actual history (with the exception of the spirit phone itself, which is being marketed by Thomas Edison as a consumer product). If you suddenly appeared in the New York of the novel, it would look just like the real 1899 New York. Most of the anachronistic technology, such as a high-speed airship, is behind the scenes.

Every time I thought something might be historically incorrect, I checked it, especially ā€œpublicā€ technology and language. I took pains to make sure no one was using a 20th or 21st century expression. One exception is the expletive ā€œwanker,ā€ used by Crowley, that dates from the 1940s (in print), which I decided to use anyway because it conveyed the feeling I wanted. (One reviewer on the website LibraryThing claimed I was adding historical details only to ā€œshow offā€ my research rather than advance the story, but gave no examples of the allegedly superfluous details.)

I dispensed with accuracy in the case of certain biographical details, of course. Thereā€™s no evidence I know of that Crowley and Tesla ever met in real life, and a lot of the advanced technology I attribute to Tesla in the book isnā€™t necessarily stuff the real Tesla made, such as a metal detector and a taser. And as far as I know, Aleister Crowley never levitated naked up the side of Devils Tower in Wyoming.Ā 

Q4: Crowley and Tesla were just a delight to see interact with each other! Where did this idea of chocolate consumption for heightened clairvoyant powers come from?

 

O’Keefe: I actually donā€™t recall (ironically!) exactly how I came up with eating chocolate as a way for Crowley to recall a crucial lost memory. There is a scene in which Crowley is trapped, mid-teleport, in a bizarre environment. I came up with that first, then decided that Crowley had forgotten the incident, but needed to remember it, and I struck upon the taste of chocolate as a kind of mnemonic.Ā 

I think of Crowley and Tesla as a kind of oil & water mix, a speculative fiction ā€œodd couple,ā€ and when I came up with the idea for the book, it surprised me that (as far as I knew) no one else had ever put them together in a novel. I think there might be one other novel out there with the two of them (I canā€™t remember the title), which I learned of after I started writing The Spirit Phone. And I think Crowley shows up in one issue of the comic Herald: Lovecraft and Tesla.

Ā Thereā€™s no evidence the two met in real life, though they were both living in New York during World War I.Ā 

Q5: all throughout the story we read how Crowley and Temple use these grids to summon ā€˜familiarsā€™. Tell us more about that.

 

O’Keefe: In hindsight, maybe I should have called them talismans instead of ā€œgrids.ā€ They are taken from a book of magic titled The Book of the Sacred Magic of Abramelin the Mage, aka The Book of Abramelin. Itā€™s thought to date from the 15th century, but the original publication date is unclear. The book was used by Aleister Crowley in real life, so I decided to draw upon it.

There were already German, Hebrew, and French editions of Abramelin when S.L. MacGregor Mathers, an associate of Crowleyā€™s, translated it into English. Mathersā€™ translation was published in 1900. The book was used by Crowley early in his occult practices, in particular at Boleskine House, his estate in Scotland near Loch Ness. There are even rumors that Crowley called forth the Loch Ness Monster.

The talismans (ā€œgridsā€ in the novel) are said to be a means to accomplish various feats of magic. Every use in the novel corresponds to a claimed use in The Book of Abramelin. For example, when Crowley summons the demon (or familiar) Lirion so that she can interrogate a spirit trapped within Edisonā€™s spirit phone prototype, he uses a talisman described in The Book of Abramelin as used ā€œTo know Secret Operations.ā€ When the demon-familiar Ashtaroth is summoned to try to get rid of a massive lump of magnetite that is causing an emergency aboard the airship, the talisman used is one described in Abramelin as meant to perform ā€œChemical labours and Operations, as regardeth Metals especially.ā€ Similarly, the names of all three demon-familiars depicted in the novelā€“Lirion, Ashtaroth, and Elerionā€“are taken directly from The Book of Abramelin.Ā 

This was another point where ā€œhistorical accuracyā€ had to give way to the demands of the plot. In The Book of Abramelin, the magical operations described are often time-consuming, meticulous, and ceremonial, but I wanted something more dynamic and fast-paced. So I just have Crowley write out a grid and call the demon, boom.Ā Ā 

Q6: you and a few other authors like Bonsart Bokel are redefining modern fiction by using a different approach. Alternate history in the last few yearsā€™ mainstream has been, frankly, a joke. But you guys are exploring realms that are opening ground for new and compelling literature. What are your thoughts on this approach?

 

O’Keefe: Well, I tend to read more ā€œwidelyā€ than ā€œdeeply,ā€ and I canā€™t say I have a take on any recently published alternate history fiction. Those works which have inspired me are from the 20th century. For example, Harry Turtledoveā€™s The Guns of the South, Gibson & Sterlingā€™s The Difference Engine, and Len Deightonā€™s SS-GB (which is alternate history but non-science fiction). Then thereā€™s The Man in the High Castle by Philip K. Dick, which depicts a novelist living in an alternate timeline who writes about ā€œourā€ reality as an alternate timeline. I think the original alternate history novel depicting the introduction of advanced technology into a past era is actually a 19th century work: A Connecticut Yankee in King Arthurā€™s Court by Mark Twain, though it is not usually seen as ā€œspeculative fiction.ā€Ā 

I think of The Spirit Phoneā€™s premise and particular mix of historical characters as its distinctive points, but if Iā€™m opening up any new ground beyond that, Iā€™m happy. Maybe itā€™s also that the occult and technology both feature prominently, either separately or combined, though I donā€™t think Iā€™m the first writer to try that.Ā 

While alternate history is one aspect of The Spirit Phone, I think of it as a cross-genre work combining elements of horror, science fiction, science fantasy, murder mystery, and action-adventure. (Locus Magazine calls The Spirit Phone a historical fantasy. I have no objection to the label.) When I started writing the book, I didnā€™t think, ā€œIā€™m going to write a horror novel,ā€ or ā€œIā€™m going to write a science fiction novel.ā€ It was more like, ā€œI want to write a novel with lots of weird stuff happening,ā€ and added whatever elements I needed to make it so.Ā 

Q7: The Spirit Phone seemed to be a complete story. So what can we expect next from Mr O’Keefe? Will the Crowley/Tesla team be somehow reunited? Or any new projects you can tell us about? I think I can speak on behalf of VP and all of our readers and we definitely want to see more of these legends in the making!

 

O’Keefe: My current projects are: an English punctuation style guide for a publisher in Japan (which is nearly complete); an essay on Aleister Crowleyā€™s poetry collection Alice: An Adultery, which will be partly based upon an article I wrote on Crowleyā€™s visit to Japan in 1901; and a second novel which may or may not be a sequel to The Spirit Phone. Itā€™s very much in flux at the moment.

 

Make sure to check outĀ  the author’s work if it sounds interesting to you. Tell us what you think in the comments and tell somebody else about what we’re doing at Virtual Pulp.

Marketing Wisdom with Luke Stone & Crom

This was such an informative stream, I wanted other creators toĀ  catch it. I don’t advise sitting around watching streams for hours instead of being productive, but you can listen to this this while you’re working out, drawing, making supper, playing your instrument, etc.

One of the many takeaways is the dubious value of book trailers. Like so much I’ve done over time to provide something cool for readers/fans/followers, it takes a lot of time and effort, without earning you sales/ratings/reviews. The ROI is awful for probably 99% of authors. Something to think about.

Steampunk and Bonsart Bokel – a Q & A

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After having reviewed both The Wrench in the Machine and Journey to Elysium, we felt it necessary to have a little interview with the visionary behind this universe we are so much enjoying. All the way from the Netherlands, Mr Bonsart Bokel!

 

Q1: is what you are writing steampunk? Or what should we call it?

 

Bokel: Yes, although I use different descriptions for every book. The Wrench in the Machine takes my definition of the Steampunk genre, Cyberpunk in the Past, to ā€˜Elevenā€™.

Q2: Steampunk seems like a very niche subgenre; what the general audience sees seems to be very limited and restrictive for creativity to thrive. Do you agree?

Bokel: I think the problem is we havenā€™t had the conversation on what Steampunk should be. To many, Steampunk is just an aesthetic. They discard the idea of being a genre entirely. So it became ā€œSteampunk is like porn. You know it when you see it.ā€Ā 

Currently, there is a lot of Fantasy with a Steampunk skin. (This is not necessarily Gaslamp Fantasy either).

The other cliche is the overall approach to history. This being the ā€˜oppressor vs oppressedā€™ or ā€˜class struggleā€™ narrative. It might make for decent stories, but does not make good Alternate History.

Q3: The ā€˜historicalā€™ element in fiction has been underrated or even misused. Do you feel your approach is different when applying history to your stories?

 

Bokel: My series has a high emphasis on Alternate History, so Iā€™m taking the ā€˜Pastā€™ part of the definition very seriously. There are more Steampunk authors like that. But you wouldnā€™t know them. They went to a different school and liveĀ  in Canada now.

Joking aside, some ignore the historical part just to give themselves the freedom to explore historical processes without seeming biased. The Guns Above series is a good example of this.Ā 

Q4: My favorite character from Journey to Elysium was Subject-09ā€¦Any chance we might see her again or even have her own dedicated novel? I love her character and not because she is a woman or because she is disabled either!

Bokel: Subject-09 is kind of an accident. A silly idea that people really love for some reason. Even as a short story (Cough, check out my page on Ream, cough) S-09 quickly proved people’s favorite along with Subject-06.Ā 

Currently, I am still exploring ideas for the future novels. Although I have ideas for her, S-09 place is in the bigger picture of the overall series. There is still so much I need to figure out for what I call Phase1 of the Association of Ishtar, I wouldnā€™t be surprised if I can’t get her to shine until the start of Phase 3. When will Phase 2 start? When I finally know what I want to do for the third novel. Until then, sheā€™ll make some small appearances, like in Anwin and Journey to Elysium.

 

Q5: Tell us briefly about your latest project going live soon on KS. Is this a comic book or a novel?

 

Bokel: The Kickstarter will launch on March 17 if all goes well. The Casket Girls is a novelette about mecha pilots serving in the French Imperial Penal Legion that will be illustrated. It will also contain various miniatures for your 3D printing pleasure as we are working on an RPG.

Q6: Originality in modern fiction seems rare these days. I think you are carving out the blueprints of something new and original. What can we see from the Association of Ishtar next?

 

Bokel: I already mentioned the RPG we hope to present by the end of the year.

Iā€™m working on various books. One is a second Anwin novelette, which is about an autonomous doll and her owner, Igraine. Another is the Knights of Avalon, which is kind of the male chivalrous counterpart to the Casket Girls.Ā 

Of course we also hope to have the second issue of our comic Journey to Elysium done.

Overall, I hope to create a community creating new Subjects, Constructs and Planes to be explored. Iā€™m already doing it on the illustration front with our Alternate History videos on Youtube. Finding a way to collaborate with co-writers would be great if only to explore other genres beside hard sci-fi without losing sight of the themes of Steampunk.

 

(Gee, and here I thought Alternate History stories were simply about taking famous characters from history and swapping race or gender LOL!)

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