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Dreams Within Dreams – a Review

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Dreams Within Dreams – Serial One: Omnipresence by M.D. Boncher

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If Onslaught  resembles a sci-fi/action movie from the 90s, Dreams Within Dreams might recall The Fifth Element and  2002 TV series Firefly. Add interesting characters, a solid plot line, and just the right amount of comedy, and you have an instant winner of modern indie pulp.

What this short and enjoyable novelette also does is prove that you can have a simple, straightforward story without flat-like-pancakes characters and wooden dialogue. In fact, characters like our protagonist, Winston, display a level of humanity and depth that might be subtle on the surface yet very engaging as their adventures progress.

Same with the plot. Boncher will take us for a rollercoaster ride but he is wise enough to avoid tired-out stereotypical tropes that oversaturate the current market. His writing approach is what I admire most: don’t write solely having in mind the reaction of your readers but write what makes sense within the story you are telling.

PLOT:

Winston lives in what is referred to as ‘The Dream’, a reality that resulted from King Xiao destroying the world as we know it. In this new world Winston works for a freight company, moving goods and parcels by way of his space tug the Sierra Madre, and with the aid of a mechanical humanoid named Billy Joe.

After being offered a gig that would earn him more money than he’s ever dreamed of, Winston finds himself caught in the midst of the illegal trafficking of weapons of mass destruction for a dangerous cartel. By the time he finds out what his cargo holds, he’s in too deep! Throw in the mix two undercover officers onboard, Mr. Tollman and Ms. Iverson (aka Holly), and Winston’s plan for a big payday quickly becomes the worst ride of his life!

 

CHARACTERS:

Character development is important whether we’re talking about a very complex storyline or a very simple one. Simple characters should not be BORING characters. And in this short novel we see that formula applied to characters like Winston or even his mechanical co-pilot Billy Joe or even the attractive yet mysterious Holly. 

Winston on the surface seems to be a very practical down -to-business type of guy.  “Get the job done and get paid” is his mantra. But underneath that seemingly pragmatic persona, Winston hides demons that keep haunting him in his sleep. So much so that he finds himself almost addicted to this virtual reality rig he hooks himself up  to whenever he can, to escape a harsh reality. Readers will learn more about Winston as things progress and Holly will soon become a determining factor in Winston’s life. But not in the way you would expect whenever a stunningly attractive woman is involved.

 

A NOTE FROM THE REVIEWER: 

The author states that “the idea came to me after watching a whole bunch of old Flash Gordon serials and was like, yeah, that can be done.” The issue is that not everything that works in TV or comic books will necessarily work in novel format. 

I’m particularly referring to how Book 1 ends with a cliffhanger and really makes you feel like nothing got done, or accomplished, or fulfilled despite characters and plot becoming more and more engaging. I think every novel , even in a serialized format , should make the reader feel like things moved from point A to point B and certain goals were reached or accomplished. Here, the end feels truncated and unless you don’t buy Volume 2 you are left with a partial story, literally. My opinion is that the author should have published the entire story including Book 1, 2, and 3 as one single book because, honestly, Book 1 feels somewhat unfulfilling in the end and it felt like someone turning off your TV just when things are getting intense. Is that really how we want to feel after spending money to purchase a book?

CONCLUSIONS: 

Obviously this will get a follow-up review of Book 2, Lucid Reality.

 If anything I hope the quality enjoyed in the first book will continue and then we will go on and cover Book 3, The Waking Nightmare. 

I highly encourage you to get all 3 books together since the author ‘s approach mentioned earlier might leave some of you disappointed, or dissatisfied perhaps, by only reading Book 1 by itself!

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The Hand of God by Yuval Kordov

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THE HAND OF GOD: DARK LEGACIES BOOK 1 by YUVAL KORDOV

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When I consider Book 1 of Dark Legacies, the first words that come to my mind are: professional; competent; pragmatic; cerebral; thought-provoking. This is the type of book I might mention when folks claim that indie fiction is somewhat sloppy, mediocre, and weak. In fact, I would put the writing skills showcased by Kordov against any of the most popular tradpub’s on the market today.

That doesn’t imply that The Hand of God is a perfect sci-fi presentation, but the good FAR outweighs the bad. This is a labor of love that the author has invested years in crafting and perfecting, and that is admirable and inspiring.

 

CONTENTS:

The book is divided into

  • Prologue
  • Part 1
  • Part 2
  • Part 3

Prologue and Part 1 come off as being over-ambitious for no other reason than the fact that they feel too fragmented and confounding. This is where we are first introduced to the character of Esther and the whole narrative is a dissonant amalgamation of thoughts, dreams, visions, and memories relentlessly thrown at a reader over and over again. We see this artistic approach utilized in cinema often, where the  director uses quick cuts to abruptly overlap one scene with the next, as the character goes from awakened state to dreaming to visions, back to awakened state.

This technique doesn’t translate well from screen to prose, and it ends up irritating the senses more than stimulating them. 

 

THE MEAT:

Part 2 and 3 in my honest opinion is where readers will finally get rewarded and find their footing. The introduction of characters like Baptiste, Sophus, and Rebekah really propels the story to next-level awesomeness!  You will learn of a world which has endured not one but two apocalypses, and a city that carries the hope of man’s reconciliation with God. The prose is exquisite, the attention to details impeccable, the characters breathing with depth and humanity. 

HIGH CONCEPT NARRATIVE:

This story is a classic example of high concept narrative. High concept (as opposed to low concept) is never strictly centered around one single main character (i.e. Conan the Barbarian) but it’s rather about a multitude of characters who contribute to the story at some point.

This is in essence “a story about finding faith and finding purpose through suffering, which materializes through the lives of my characters.” (Yuval Kordov)

 

CONCLUSION:

If you want to experience a faith-based epic sci-fi legend of ambitious heights you MUST read The Hand of God. If this ever gets a big screen adaptation we could have the best visual feast since Dune and Stalker! This is a book that gives me hope in the indie sphere of fiction writing moving forward.

Will I read and review Book 2? The real question is, how could I not!

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Editor’s note: Time is running out on the Based Book Sale–stop, shop, and enjoy some non-woke books on the cheap or even free for just a few more hours!

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Velin: The Rifle’s Song by Black Knight

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Velin – The Lothorian: The Rifle’s Song by Black Knight

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When I first picked up and started reading The Rifle’s Song, which consists of Book 1 of Velin The Lothorian, I couldn’t help but get Star Wars vibes with a ‘Conan the Barbarian” type of main character. This is probably due to the blend of sci-fi and classic fantasy/action that we get to read starting on page 1 and all throughout this book. The author  unsurprisingly credits R. E. Howard’s Conan The Barbarian for his inspiration of this character.

But the comparison to Howard’s classic hero ends right there at the surface.

 

CONAN/VELIN:

The son of farmers in a distant world, Velin grew up learning hard work and how to farm land from his father. After his mother’s death due to illness, at the age of 8 a gang of slavers attacks his village, killing his father in the process and taking young Velin as a slave for hard labor.

And just like Conan, the following years of hard labor and harsh conditions will forge him and prepare him to become the unique warrior he’s destined to become.

After years of captivity Velin earns his freedom by sheer will, acute killer instincts, and physical prowess. When he is taken up by a group of Terran samurais called the ‘Terr’aan Knightly Order’- dedicating their lives to fighting slavery and injustices across the universe-Velin masters the fine arts of combat, thus becoming the perfect killing machine to fight evil and protect the weak.

 

NOBLE INTENTIONS/WEAK EXECUTION: 

Let me emphasize the indisputable fact that the author known as Black Knight is truly an outstanding human being with a noble heart. He understands the concepts of good and evil, of chivalry, of the pure and selfless hero. However where I feel he falls short is in putting it all together, for different reason:

  1. Character Development: all the characters we encounter in this story feel like they need more fleshing out. We know the basic facts about them but they are all very one-dimensional and they function only on one gear.

For example:

“He sought to draw strength not from his bleeding, scorched body, but the hallowed Terr’aan railgun instead.”

I thought it was awkward to have the main character draw strength not from his mother or father, or even his mentors, but from an object, his railgun (??)

2. Prose: I know English is the author’s third language but when we decide to put our book on the market for a price, we should ensure that the editing/proof reading is up to standards. The writer has this tendency to always put the subject last in a sentence which creates awkward structure overall.

          Example:

“Gargling, the dying, terrified beyond measure road bandit, raised his hand.”

 Also there are some word choices that the author overuses like olden instead of ancient, or nigh instead of near, or ‘twas instead of was. 

I understand that indie authors for the most part work a day job and professional editing costs money, but if we feel readers should PAY to read our books, competent editing and presentation are essential.

CONCLUSIONS: 

This is a book very well suited for younger readers who enjoy comic books and are perhaps only now finding out about the beauty of long-format fiction. Children of 10 years and older would absolutely love it. This would make a great gift to those youngsters that we want to introduce to classic pulp. 

I know Black Knight has a big following online who seem to genuinely love his work, so don’t let this review dissuade you from at least sampling his pulp novel.

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Editor’s note: Make sure to stop by the Based Book Sale and find yourself some great reads!

Fantasy, Marketing, Sci-Fi, Speculative

Based Books Be Best! Buy Boatloads, Brah!

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I know, I know: “are the best.” Don’t undervalue my alliterative Ebonics, ese.

The Based Book Sale is back–this time in conjunction with Based Con. I’ve never been to Based Con. I can only guess that it’s like Comicon or Dragon Con (never been to those, either) only without the woketards.

Anyway, the Based Book Sale is where you can find hundreds of books by dozens of non-woke authors, discounted to 99 cents…or FREE. One of those free books will be American Stasi–you should definitely grab your own copy.

This might be the last time I include all my full-length novels in the sale, so get ’em for cheap while you can.

Those full-length novels include Paradox Book Six: Confronting Fate, which caps off my coming of age time travel conspiracy thriller wrapped around football and high adventure. The BBS will have an Amazon link, but it’s also available at the other online book stores, too.

Almost all the paperbacks in the series are published, too. I’m planning an E-Book boxed set, and possibly a hardback edition.

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Onslaught by Bowen Greenwood

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An Exile War Novel –  Book 1

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As I write this review, we’re in the middle of the summer in sunny Florida, which is also a time when numerous ‘popcorn flicks’ get released. But you know what’s even better than a fun, action-packed movie? A fun, action-packed novel! And coincidentally, Onslaught is one of those novels that beg to be movies on the big screen!!

 

FIRST IMPRESSION:

Upon reading Onslaught, the first impression I got was that this book reads like a screenplay of a mid-1990s action movie. Its dynamics, action sequences, love entanglements, attractive male and female protagonists, and simple plot all reminded me of that film era when movies had primarily one object: to entertain audiences.

And this book absolutely entertains its readers, beginning to end, despite some flaws which will be discussed further in this review.

 

GENRE:

We could label this story as sci-fi but to me it felt more like ‘action with a sci-fi flavor’. The author doesn’t delve too much into the minutiae of this futuristic world as it would be the case in classic hard sci-fi, but rather focuses primarily on thrilling action with a sci-fi backdrop. Again, this feels a lot like the sci-fi element is more secondary or textural, in this instance.

 

PLOT:

We learn that in this advanced society some individuals are born with telepathic powers which, if not kept in check, could be dangerous to humanity. A league called the Gentle Hand is created to train telepaths and put them to good use for society. Our main character, Langston Wheeler, belongs to the Hand and he is tasked with finding and subduing a dangerous ‘rogue telepath’. When his fate and that of Executive Tia Dynn cross, that’s when the real fireworks begin! 

Suddenly Lang finds himself torn between fulfilling his duty as a Gentle Hand and following his heart. When a social gathering is crashed by the rogue telepath in black camouflage, the time to think is over, and it’s time for ACTION!

THE ORDER OF THE JEDI?

I couldn’t help but see similarities between the Gentle Hand and the Jedi masters in Star Wars. They are both the result of an innate power coupled with years of rigorous training and self-control in order to protect others from evil and injustice. Instead of The Force, we have ‘telepathic powers’ here that allow these gifted individuals to even shoot flames, heal injuries, or become invisible at will. 

 

FLAWS:

What I found issue with was

1) The way the love affair develops between Lang and Tia. I am all for a good heterosexual love story but this felt a little too rushed. I understand that finding each other stuck together in the middle of a war zone can bring about a special bond, but these two are already discussing the complications of marriage just a few hours after having met! I felt like if the writer took his time to develop their reciprocal feelings more organically the emotional payoff for the readers could have been greater.

The other issue I had was:

2) The way characters like the hybrids-the result of genetic experiments on humans/hogs DNA-is not tackled in a way that would make the reader care much. What exactly led scientists to combine human and hog genes, leading to these creatures? What was the drive or intent of this research originally? 

It doesn’t need to turn into a science lesson but at least create a foundation of plausible ideas that would make all these elements more compelling.

 

IN CLOSING:

This felt like watching a 1990s movie in the summer. Full of action, explosions, pew-pew, and a good-looking woman and a handsome man not being able to take their eyes off each other. 

Frankly, I’ll take Onslaught before any movie these days!

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Nach Schema F by Shaun Stafford

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“What’s the difference between communism and National Socialism?”

“Communism is the exploitation of one man by another man, whereas National Socialism is the other way round.”

 

Nach Schema F is the title of Book 2 of the alternate history series The Greater German Reich. This was written several years after Book 1 so it was interesting to see how the author’s style changed, if at all. Book 1 was an excellent dystopian drama and I was excited to see whether Stafford was able to even maintain that same level of compelling storytelling. If so, I’d be a happy reader!

 

PLOT:

We pick up exactly where book 1 left us. Combat UK is down but not out, in fact there are still members of the English insurrection group working unceasingly on the next move to sabotage the Reich’s control over Großbritannien (German-invaded Great Britain).

Nazi agent Ellen, whom we already encountered in Book 1 is now going through a personal journey of regrets and second thoughts regarding her loyalty to the current regime. Nevertheless, she reluctantly fulfills her duties along with her new partner agent Himmler, nicknamed ‘Willy’.

Things heat up as Marcus Dauny (who works on the launch control system for Missile Command) teams up with American undercover agent  Barry Rhodes. Rhodes is ultimately detained, tortured, and interrogated by the German secret service. He gives the name of an SS officer working at a missile bunker in Grenoble. And this is how the Nazis find out that Combat UK’s master plan is to nuke Germania, killing the Fuhrer along with over 20 million people!

Will the plan succeed?

ALTERNATE REALITY:

What I really admire about Stafford is how he is able to infuse a certain level of realism to an alternate world. German-ruled Great Britain feels quite believable thanks to the depth of the characters and the description of locations. Not once we are prone to say “That could never happen!”. On the contrary, everything feels even too real at times.

 

TORTURE/INTERROGATION:

As you recall, I mentioned the vivid brutality in book 1, when it came to Nazi’s interrogation techniques. Nothing is off the menu when it comes to the means by which the German SS will inflict fear and pain to make a prisoner talk. However, in Book 2 the physical violence and abuse is toned down a notch, and instead we get to learn about other, more subtle interrogation techniques which involve administering psychedelic drugs to the prisoners in order to relax them and thus be able to get more information out of them.

 

CLOSING REMARKS:

Nach Schema F is another tremendous success by my standards. Never a dull moment, great pace, straightforward prosaic style, compelling characters and unpredictable plot lines! 

We will definitely cover Book 3 soon! 

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Scout’s Honor by Henry Vogel

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David Rice is a “Terran Scout” who crash lands on a world colonized long ago, then left to develop on its own.  The Scout falls right into a feudal conflict as well as  some palace intrigue, and it’s off to the races.

The characters barely get a chance to breathe. because the  action is almost non-stop. The reader may want for breathing room, too, because every chapter I remember ends with a cliffhanger.

If this sounds like retro-pulp, well, it is. Specifically, it conforms to a genre called “sword & planet.”  However you felt about John Carter’s adventures on Mars, that’s probably how you’ll feel about Scout’s Honor. The manuscript could be taken back to the 1930s, each chapter used as an episode to be published in multiple issues of a pulp periodical, and nobody would be the wiser. You’ll find that the character development and the romance simulates what came off Edgar Rice Burroughs’ typewriter as well.

When Rice (coincidence? I think not) lands on this planet, a beautiful princess and her bodyguard are under attack.  He comes to their aid, and not too much later he pledges his life-long support to the princess. This guy must have been a recruiter’s wet dream. But he’s not doomed to rot away from jealousy as the princess dallies with and/or marries somebody else, because she falls in insta-love with him, too. Luckily for them both, nobody has much of a problem with foreigners of non-noble blood merging into the royal line, either.

This would be a good read for children and young adults who can handle long-form fiction. Adults looking for a few hours of escape should appreciate it, too.

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Bound for the Styx by Bonsart Bokel

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~She couldn’t help but sob. There were bleeding cuts all over her hands, and the dodo’s beak had scratched her cheeks. Her dress was all dirty and covered in dust. Her pretty hat was all bent and riddled with peck marks. As tears started to flow, she pulled Anwin from her pouch.~

 

I’ve gotta be honest, when I was first introduced to Igraine Mortuba in Book 1 (A Wrench in The Machine) I was not completely  sold on her character. She  came off as an ungrateful little brat, especially toward Ol’ Barrow, who saved her life on more than one occasion. But in Book 2 her charm and spontaneity are quickly winning me over. This is one of the two main reasons why I think Bound for The Styx is yet another solid publication by author/youtuber Bonsart Bokel.

PLOT:

Even if you haven’t read Book 1, Book 2 can be followed without any previous knowledge of events. Basically it’s an account of Igraine’s journey to Arkology as told by Igraine herself to former inspector and now RFA member Mr. Ol’ Barrow.

Due to needing new implants to survive the ongoing ‘decay’ the body goes through when traveling over multiverses, the Association of Ishtar sends Igraine to Arkology, on Elysium, where she can get this unique procedure done. Little does she know that in exchange, she will have to undertake a mission on behalf of the Founder, who rules Arkology. Joined by a group of resourceful scavs (Cheff, Cutter, Breach, Cabby, and Neir), Igraine has no choice but to delay her return home and get involved in the local affairs of Arkology.

ALICE IN WONDERLAND/IGRAINE IN ARKOLOGY:

What I really like about this story is that I see a parallel with classic childrens’ tale Alice’s Adventures in Wonderland, albeit in a steampunk setting. Our Igraine is a seemingly timid yet resourceful young girl thrown into a world where nothing seems to function as in her own world, and where the ‘unconventional’ becomes the norm. 

And just like the classic Lewis Carroll children’s tale, Bound for the Styx could have had all the potential to become a new and original classic for all ages (more on that later). Igraine’s French accent, with her “Oui” and “Non” exclamations and gentle demeanor really serve as the finishing touches on a character that both children and adults could easily feel drawn to.

PACE:

The pace feels at times a little slow but if you consider what Bokel is trying to create here, it is quite understandable. This is not just about telling one story but rather about adding another piece to the world of multiverses of the Association of Ishtar. 

 

ARKOLOGY:

After reading about Elysium in Bokel’s graphic novel-Journey to Elysium-we finally find out what this body revolving around the moon is all about. Elysium is basically this massive satellite structure with life and civilization within it. Its capital is Arkology, and this is where Igraine finds herself right now. The place is like the Wild West, where only the strong survive, and where different social classes fight in the struggle for dominance.

CLOSING REMARKS:

The only negative remark has to do with some of the sexual content. I was really hoping that the author would have kept this rated PG all the way, but by adding those sexually-charged scenes, this automatically turns into a 14-and-over rated book. I understand that it’s the author’s personal choice, but like I said before many times, what we need today is more content that is appropriate for all ages while getting both children and adults fired up for more. 

Think about Lord of the Rings; 3 books, not one single sex scene or even profanity, and yet people of all ages love it today as much as ever. You can still have love stories develop, that is not what I’m inferring at all. Yet no current author has been able to pull that off, and that’s exactly the type of content we so dearly need, or at least that I personally hope to see.

Other than that, the story is fun, the world building is as always compelling, and the characters all memorable!

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Action, Adventure, Espionage, Historical, Sci-Fi, Socio-Sexual Studies, Speculative, Sports, TEOTWAWKI

Behold the Based Book Bargains Blast

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As mentioned before, the latest novel in the Paradox Series was released in time for Father’s Day.

If you haven’t heard of the Paradox Series yet, it’s a time travel sports adventure that begins as a coming-of-age tale in the first novel and climaxes as a wild conspiracy thriller in Book Six (coming in a couple few months). Themes of manhood/masculinity, leadership, and truth vs. popular perception run through the entire course of the overarching plot.

I’m happy to report that all five books in the series so far have been category bestsellers. Five for five is batting really well. Even though I’d still like to stretch the envelope of success, I didn’t even imagine the series would do this well back when I decided to break up the Super Great American Mega-Novel.

More important to you is that right now, you’ve still got a little time to pick up the entire series (plus the entire Retreads Series) at 99 cents per full-length novel. This is not just  on Amazon, but all the online stores with E-Books for sale (linked throughout this post, along with the ‘Zon series pages).

My books, plus dozens more, are all heavily discounted at the Summer Based Book Sale. As always, there are more books by more authors than the previous sale.

 

Non-woke authors are providing alternatives to the ubiquitous Globohomo narratives that are disgusting you and targeting your children. We all want an escape in our entertainment. Consider buying it from people who don’t hate you.

Sadly for you, the sale ends Wednesday morning.

Adventure, Sci-Fi, Sports, Time Travel

Books for Sons Without Dads

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If you’re like me, you barely notice when Father’s Day comes around. A good wife will remind you, and maybe do something nice for you on that day, otherwise, we’d probably never know.

So many men today grew up without fathers—sometimes literally. For those of us who were fortunate enough to know ours, quite often we saw our fathers only sporadically as part of a custody arrangement. Even before our parents’ divorces, our fathers were physically absent often, and emotionally absent otherwise. They weren’t all that interested in us once we were no longer cute little toddlers—if they even were then.

Then we felt guilty if they ever made an effort to take an interest in us for a little while, because by then we knew they had a lot to do that was far more important than us.

Beyond that, some fathers were abusive, in one way or another.

There’s a whole generation of us out here now, trying to behave differently than our own fathers did, and giving our kids the advantages we never had. If you’re like me, even though all that is behind you and you’re doing the best you can with the cards you were dealt, you often reflect on your younger years and wonder if you might have made better decisions had you enjoyed the benefit of a dad who tried to prepare you for what life had in store.

Before I first began writing Paradox, I wanted to tell a fun men’s adventure tale that involved time travel. Then, while the idea germinated, I couldn’t help speculating on some “what if”s:

When I was a young man, what if I knew  what I know now? What if I had a role model to clue me in on life, so I didn’t have to learn everything the hard way? What could I have accomplished if even a few of my ignorant decisions were never made?

In Book One of the Paradox Series, our hero is just about to enter puberty, going through life like many of us did at that age, with no dad, assuming that our single mothers and the culture at large were guiding us competently on the path to manhood. And doomed to a series of failures, defeats, bewilderment and disillusionment over how nothing works the way we were told it would.

Our hero encounters a mysterious uncle who begins to turn his life onto a new path right away. Out of all the advantages this new role model provides, perhaps the most valuable is the wisdom of how to deal with other people in general, and females in particular.

Paradox follows the hero from his pre-teen years into his late 20s. There are four books in the series published so far. The fifth one releases on Father’s Day (Sunday 6/16/24). Of the reviews these books have received so far, the consensus is that they’re full of wisdom that boys and men need, but mostly, they’re fun.

Check ‘em out!

Book 1: Escaping Fate

Book 2: Rebooting Fate

Book 3: Defying Fate

Book 4: Provoking Fate

Book 5: Resisting Fate