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Interview with the Brothers Krynn

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šŸ¦€: Both of you gentlemen are like writing machines, with a very extensive body of work. So why did you choose Crown of Blood as your first published title?

 

Joseph & Daniel: It seemed a short project and one we both liked, so we just did it.Ā 

šŸ¦€: The book revolves around the bloody history of the crown of Caledonia (now Scotland). Why did you decide to focus on that particular region to develop your story on?

 

Joseph: Because weā€™re part Scottish and since I first began studying Scottish Medieval history & folklore I developed a strong sense of kinship with the Scots, and could not resist developing something of a mythology for them.Ā 

šŸ¦€: Even though Crown of Blood is structured into short stories, they’re all part of a larger tale. Did you feel like this wouldn’t have worked as well if it were to be presented as just one long story divided into chapters instead?

 

Joseph & Daniel: No, it would not have worked half as well, due to us having to stick to one overall narrative/set of characters rather than dancing between all the characters that we follow the perspective of in the story. That, and it would have been even more confusing in our view.Ā 

šŸ¦€: As a reader progresses into the book, more characters and more names are being introduced, and sometimes many characters have the same names as their predecessors. Did you not consider that at some point things could get a little confusing for readers in general?

 

Joseph: Yeah, and it’s why for the sequel and next edition weā€™re planning to add a family tree and a map.Ā 

šŸ¦€: I was particularly fascinated by the ā€˜three cronesā€™ that keep appearing here and there throughout the book. Who are they really and what are their origins?

 

Daniel: The three crones are from Shakespeare, they are the three hags that corrupt Macbeth in the play, except weā€™ve set them up in our world. As to their origin, not sure weā€™ve fully developed all the ideas for their backstory, but weā€™re currently working on it.Ā 

 

šŸ¦€: Today there seems to be confusion about what the image of the classic knight should look like. If you had to condense the elements that cannot be altered from the model of the classic knight, how would you do that?

 

Joseph: Honourable, intelligent and bold, and utterly devout. Iā€™d say Aragorn, Roland and also the likes of Conan the Cimmerian are all good examples of classic knights.Ā 

šŸ¦€: With modern feminism, we have seen a rise in both literature and entertainment to create female heroines, soldiers, and knights. These women are basically doing what men do in every aspect. Do you think that is how we ought to portray ā€˜strong womenā€™?

 

Joseph: Nope. We ought to portray women as feminine. We can portray women as fierce warriors but must never forget to write flawed and human women, who struggle just as men do but who have a certain femininity about them. Honestly feminism has ruined female heroes.Ā 

šŸ¦€: Speaking of strong women, it is no secret that my all time favorite strong woman is Joan of Arc. But she never even killed one man in battle (though got wounded herself on the battlefield twice) and she is not known for her skills in combat or sword fighting. Yet her strength humbles me and inspires me daily. Why is someone like Joan not praised today (not even by women!) despite the fact that our society is constantly looking for superheroines for inspiration?

 

 

Joseph: Because for one thing Jehanne was a pious woman who looked to God, and society has lost touch with God. What is more is that Jehanne was a gentle woman who loved her nation, and to love oneā€™s nation is also out of style in our modern times. Jehanne thus represents everything that is antithetical to modernity and liberalism; a pious, kindly, feminine and nationalistic woman who sacrificed for others.Ā 

šŸ¦€:Ā  When can we expect your next official publication to come out and what is it going to be about?

 

Daniel & Joseph: Not sure…Joeā€™s hoping to have Darkspire Conspiracy published some time next year. And weā€™re thinking around January or February to have Crown of Blood Part 2 finished and hopefully published. After that? Weā€™re also hoping to publish around December the first book of Olympnomachi, a massive Silmarillion epic Joeā€™s been working on for years.Ā 

 

šŸ¦€:Ā Thank you Joseph and Daniel, I’m very proud of you and what you are doing is perhaps even more noble than you can see right now. Your writing tells me that NEW LEGENDS are being made!

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We Have a Winner!! (Infamous Contest)

INFAMOUSšŸ¦€ REVIEWER Short Story Contest Winner:

MOTHER

by Sarah Kirk Pierzchala

 

Q1: Sarah, first of all let me tell you that choosing a winner was no easy task for us, but in the end I was very happy it was your story for a few reasons. Can you tell us more about the origins of Mother?

 

Sarah: First, let me thank you for offering this opportunity for us writers to participate in such a fun contest! Iā€™ve never had much success writing stories to prompts, but as soon as I read the parameters for this competition, the setting swiftly formed in my mindā€™s eye and the different elements fell into place pretty soon after that.

 

Q2: The 1st act, as Henry also pointed out, very much reminds me of that 20-ish minute intro in the original Planet of The Apes (1968). We were both taken by how you handled that part of the story: the lone adventurer exploring a new world. What or who inspired you to go that route?

 

Sarah: This story is more ā€˜pulpyā€™ than I normally write, so I definitely wanted to capture that sense of mystery, adventure and survival. There was certainly some influence from ā€˜60ā€™s films like Jules Verneā€™s ā€œMysterious Islandā€, but I also just imagined what I might feel as that character in that situation. Also, since Iā€™ve written an entire novel that mostly takes place on a small island with limited characters, I knew how important it is to make the story location itself almost as developed as its own character.

 

Q3: The main character is a woman who apparently was not at the top of her class in the academy. What then drove her to keep going and stay alive in such dire circumstances?

 

Sarah: Obviously, anyone who made it through an exobiologist program would meet some minimum psychological requirements to survive in a situation like that. Think how rigorously NASA selects and trains their astronauts! Also, her natural curiosity about the location helped her to not panic and give up.

Q4: For me the deciding factor to award your story 1st place was how you combined the ā€˜crabā€™ element with the ā€˜islandā€™ element in such a creative way I personally didn’t see it coming until the very end. Where did that specific idea come from or was that something you had already brewing in the back of your mind?

 

Sarah: For me, seeing those words in proximity just handed the premise to me without requiring much effort on my part. The main challenge was to develop the drama and sense of wonder within the space constraints.

Q5: The big question now is, can we hope to see more of this universe come to life? I feel like between the MC, the island, the crabs, and the entire element of mystery there could be a lot more to explore here.

 

Sarah: I hadnā€™t really thought about that, but Iā€™m delighted it made such an impression on you! I really enjoyed crafting the protagonist and creating the relationship between her and her environment, so who knowsā€”there could be more to come some day!

Note from Henry: Gio is right–it was very difficult to pick a winner. All the submissions were solid and fun. We have showcased the work of these talented authors (and many others) on Virtual Pulp, and from our interactions with them came this contest. The quality of these entries reflects on how good Gio is at sniffing out the literary treasures in the colossal slush pile that is the e-book market of today.

Q&A with J. Sebastian King

(Author of BRIDGEHOUSE)

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Q1: First thing that strikes me most about Bridgehouse is how professional it comes across when reading its content. Hard to believe this is your first publication. Can you tell us more about your writing background?

 

King:Ā I’ve always been into storytelling, especially in movies.Ā  I went to film school (both theory and production) because it offered the broadest applicability.Ā  The rules of good screenwriting and stage direction, blocking, etc., apply to all the forms, whether it’s a novel, comic, moving image or interactive experience.Ā  I didn’t go into the film industry (blech), but I got what I wanted out of the degree.

As for actual writing, I did NaNoWriMo for a few years until I got bored of it.Ā  I wouldn’t show off any of that work, but it taught me how to crank out a serious word count on a daily basis.Ā  That put something on Bridgehouse‘s scale within grasping distance.

That’s about it for background, really.

Putting aside the novel’s development (a story in itself), I just wanted it to be as good as I could make it, and being broke means I have to wear all the hats.Ā  Paying customers expecting quality won’t accept excuses like not being able to afford an editor or typesetter or whoever, so I had to become proficient at all of it.

Mostly, I just didn’t allow myself to get away with being lazy or dishonest about problems.

Still, Bridgehouse does have some rough patches that a pro editor would likely balk at.Ā  I’ve already corrected those bad habits in my current work, and I’d love to some day do a revised edition of the novel with that extra half-percent of polish applied, and maybe with illustrations just for fun.

Q2: Here we have three main storylines which ever so slowly begin to converge in ways that leave the reader in awe, to say the least. How did that concept come about?

 

King:Ā The narrative braid was a central conceit from relatively early on.

Catherine’s story is the oldest part both in fiction and truth, since I began working on it circa 2014, but it got set aside for a while.

Pon’s story came next, beginning sometime in 2015 or 2016, and was initially unrelated to Catherine’s altogether.Ā  His story went through the greatest evolution, growing in scope and scale the more I poked at it.Ā  I’d originally envisioned it only needing around 25k words to tell!Ā  Hilarious, given that just his introduction chapter in the Overture is nearly 10k.

Also, it was more obviously science fiction in its earliest form.Ā  Proto-Pon lived on a standard-issue sci-fi colony world, though the intelligence arc and overall journey plots were the same.

Then came the idea to combine the two stories, and Catherine’s tale became the backstory to Pon’s setting.Ā  From there, his turned increasingly fantastical the more I worked on it and the more I took the time scales seriously.

Qona’s story emerged during the development of Pon’s.Ā  Proto-Rado already existed as the typical Magic Helper, but proto-Qona was only a nameless background character, with her role being something like Moses’s sister Miriam.Ā  At that point, Lilia wasn’t much more than a love interest motivation for Pon.

But then, while I was massaging the event that became the Vei’id Wohen, I realized I could do something really cool with the proto-Qona if I promoted her to first-class character with her own arc and setting.

Thus, Qona Itarte was born.

I thought the neatest way to present the resulting super-story was something like a crab canon—which is a kind of musical palindrome where an arrangement and its backwards complement are played at the same time.Ā  So Pon and Qona’s stories began spiraling around each other, and Catherine’s story made the third strand of the braid.

Everything fell into place after that, though it still took several years of pondering and false starts before the first draft began in 2022.

Q3: Qona Itarte is a main character that seems to embrace the mantle of a national hero, a legend, and even a martyr. What inspired this character originally?

King:Ā Qona is something of an Athena; she popped out of my head as a fully-formed symbol, though I didn’t fully understand what that symbol meant until I was approaching the climax in the first draft.

In the particulars, she’s very much my synthesis of the ancient Sumerian goddess Inana/Ishtar and the princesses NausicaƤ and Kushana, from Miyazaki’s NausicaƤ of the Valley of the Wind (the manga, not the film, which has a very different Kushana).

Symbolically, though I wasn’t thinking in these terms at the time, what I wanted was a kind of Queen David or Solomon, an inspiring, near-superhuman world-shaping leader who is nonetheless fatally human, whose mistakes and failures are as consequential as her victories and whose spirit is greater than her flesh.

She ended up stealing the show, so I think I got it right.

Q4: Essentially this book could be labeled as sci-fi but really incorporates other genres into it. It feels as though you wanted to write science fiction, but also sword and sorcery and perhaps space opera like Star Wars, and Bridgehouse was the result. Is that even close to how you look at it?

 

King:Ā I subscribe to the notion that fantasy and science fiction are both subcategories of speculative fiction, diverging in one fundamental way: fantasy exists in an unknowable universe, and SF exists in a knowable one.

The setting of Bridgehouse is a knowable universe.

I like to fancy it hard science fiction, but perhaps crunchy science fiction is more honest, and the completed three-volume story will probably be correctly labeled space opera.

I do my best to adhere to known physics; thermodynamics is a first-class concern, relativity applies, etc.Ā  But, especially in Pon’s story, I don’t explain things that way, if I explain them at all.

As an example, in Chapter 15 (Crest), the river leading to Highest-Home is hot and muggy for days, the karst-landscape valley filled with a stinking mist that later clears.Ā  That mist is created by waste heat being pumped into the river by a mysterious process occurring ‘off-screen’, but I only use it as environmental description.Ā  Readers who have reached the end of the book can guess at the nature of that process.

That said, one of my favorite books and biggest inspirations is Vernor Vinge’s A Fire Upon the Deep, and what really struck me was how Vinge used character perspective to achieve a really slick fantasy flair atop a serious sci-fi story.

The genre-jamming in Bridgehouse is a deliberate use of this effect.Ā  Catherine’s story feels like traditional hard sci-fi because that is the world she perceives, Pon’s story feels like fantasy grounded in myth because that is the world he perceives, and Qona’s story carries an operatic mode because she lives in the decline of a post-Singularity galaxy of wonders.

Books Two and Three continue the genre-mixing trend, including proper space opera; I’m hoping to achieve a full Macross moment by the end.

The downside is that it makes explaining the book in a succinct way very difficult.

Q5: What I admire the most is the scope and ā€˜massivenessā€™ of this project. It was also what initially made me doubt the outcome. But you proved me wrong. Is there any advice you can give to upcoming independent authors in order to never lose control of their ship, for lack of a better term?

 

King:Ā I’m still riding this particular boat, and Book Two is a much more ambitious and complex work than Bridgehouse, so any advice I give might be flawed.

Nonetheless, I am an admirer of the aviator and writer Antoine de Saint-ExupĆ©ry, author of The Little Prince.Ā  He believed in a beautiful premise, which he stated as, ā€œPerfection is achieved, not when there is nothing more to add, but when there is nothing left to take away.ā€

Bridgehouse readers will note his full name is Antoine Marie Jean-Baptiste Roger.

In practice, don’t worry about hitting every note during the first draft.Ā  Focus on getting the core narrative down first, with clear story beats and a well-defined structure, and resist the urge to overly world-build.

Then, during revisions, you can figure out what the story actually needs.Ā  If it has too much, cut what doesn’t help the story.Ā  If it needs something more, add only the minimum needed to make the story work.

That’s much easier when you’re working backwards from a tangible ending.

As an example, in Bridgehouse, the mechstrosities present a major environmental threat.Ā  Though they were always planned for the story, they never appear in the first draft.Ā  In fact, the first time I wrote them was in an early chapter of Book Two!

Also, Kalas disappeared after Chapter 9, most of the Angel Bay men were nameless background characters, the Sorceress Jevim didn’t exist nor did any of the Anjhall Security soldiers we follow through the war.Ā  Watru only came into being the moment I needed a medic in Chapter 12, and Ladhe appeared in revisions to support his new sections.Ā  Poor Braedh was never seen at all.

If I’d tried to juggle all of that on the first draft I would have been completely bogged down in the details and wasted a lot of time trying to develop characters without a clear goal for many of them.Ā  Each piece was added only after I worked backward from the ending and determined something in the narrative was lacking.

The first draft took three months.Ā  Revisions took over a year.

Q6: As I wrote in my review, your approach to story writing at times reminds me of another indie author, James Krake. You both seem to be very pragmatic and very analytical. Do you make a conscious effort to pay attention to even the slightest details that go into a story?

 

King:Ā Of course.Ā  Everything is there for a reason, or in some cases many reasons, some of which won’t become clear until the later books.Ā  Even the occasional oblique cultural references are carefully chosen for secret meanings.

Bridgehouse generated about 30k words of notes during revisions, and the glossary features around five thousand words of extraneous details I just thought were fun to include somewhere.

 

Q7: Finally, I want to thank you for not only blessing me with a new great universe that I thoroughly enjoyed, but for proving me wrong when I was convinced this book was going to be a FAIL! What can we expect in Book Two and can we hope to still see Qona, without giving too much away?

 

King:Ā I’m glad you enjoyed it.Ā  I know the story’s length is a big reader investment, and I aimed to reward that investment.

Book Two continues right where Bridgehouse leaves off, following Catherine, Lilia, Pon and Amata, and we’ll also meet new main characters in new storylines.

The narrative katamari keeps rolling and the scale keeps increasing.Ā  We’ll explore the Many Worlds and Bridges, meet the Starborne and learn more about the natures of the Vei’id Wohen and what the people of LW642 called the Isema System.Ā  There will be space battles, Deadworld ruin explorers, a cute intrepid space girl, high weirdness, cosmic horror, betrayals, tragic revelations and devastating victories.

And romance, of course.

As for Qona, I’ll point out that the Codetta ends with her rose chapter emblem as a cadence.

Book two’s tentative title is Matron of the Many Worlds.

It will probably be published in 2025.Ā  The first draft is done, but just as with Bridgehouse the bulk of the work is in the revision process.Ā  Even in rough form it can knock your socks off, though!Ā  It’s going to be great.

In the meantime I have two other, much more modest books I’m prioritizing for release this year.

One is the first in a series of planned Bridgehouse-related novels, collectively titled Malin and the Sorcerers of Virsh.Ā  (I call it MatSoV.)Ā  It tells the story of Malin ir Malin and his equine Crashing-Storm as they begin a return home following the events in Pon’s story.Ā  It’s canonical to the other books but outside the scope of the proper sequels, and can be read independent of Bridgehouse.

It will be a pure sword and sorcery pulp serial, with a straightforward and focused narrative.Ā  This first book will be somewhere in the range of 60 to 70k words, so relatively bite-sized.Ā  I’m in revisions now, plan to get it into beta-reader hands in July and will likely publish this autumn at the latest.

The other book is a semi-secret project I’m taking a completely different production approach with.Ā  It’s a fast-paced noble-bright pulp space opera thing that might be comparable in length to the MatSoV book, but I’m still cranking on the first draft so it’s hard to say.Ā  I’d like to get it out this year.

 

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Interview with Author Paul Leone

Q1:What inspired The Dweller in Drury Lane? Are there any other related works that precede or follow this that might help further explore these legends you are creating?

 

Leone: Both Yaā€™el and Renee and Innocence appeared in previous stories, and I thought putting their tales (including a few new ones) side by side would make for an interesting contrast. Theyā€™re all part of my Immortal Champions setting, which starts off in my novella The Governess of Greenmere and continues in the short story collections The Hungry Dead of YĆ¼-Ching and Other Stories, Kung Fu Antipopes and Other Strange Stories, The Third Crown and Other Weird Tales and Webs and Shadows: Strange Stories of Barsetshire.

Q1/2: So where do we first encounter Ya’el, Renee, and Innocence?

Leone: Yaā€™el is first mentioned in ā€œThe Holy Woman of the Westā€ in The Third Crown, while Renee and Innocence debut in ā€œA Ride in Barsetshireā€ in Webs and Shadows.

Q2: The first thing one notices when reading The Dweller is your prose. How did you develop such a magnificent prosaic style? How do you manage to completely block out all traces of modern-day euphemisms and urban jargon in your writing?

Leone: I think itā€™s a combination of reading (a lot) and writing (a lot). Find an author or two who write like you want to, and just immerse yourself in their works. In my case, I aimed to imitate J.R.R. Tolkienā€™s writing style, especially in the first half of The Return of the King.Ā 

Q3: Who was Ya’el before becoming an Immortal Champion? How did she become an Immortal Champion?

Leone: Yaā€™elā€™s background is still a little foggy to me, but she was the daughter of a shepherd in the 2nd century BC. After an encounter with one of the night people (my general term for vampires, witches and other evil beings), she met Nimrod (then the Champion of the Holy Land) and became his student and eventual successor.

Q3/2: What exactly is a Champion and where did the idea come from?

Leone: Immortal Champions are the chosen servants and warriors of the Angels of Limbo (or Sheol, as Yaā€™el calls it; thereā€™s many different names). Long ago, the ā€˜neutral angelsā€™ were cast out of Heaven for not taking a side in Satanā€™s rebellion, and some of them have since decided to atone for their cowardice by helping humanity against the minions of the Devil. There are 72 Champions all around the world who use their powers (immortality, greater physical abilities, and what might be called ā€˜magicā€™) to protect mankind. The basic idea has been in my brain for almost 20 years ā€“ what if the Slayers from Buffy the Vampire Slayer were put into an explicitly Christian setting? ā€“ and grew until I came up with Elise from The Governess of Greenmere and then her various peers.

Q4: I personally fell in love with the character of Coem from Hibernia. She comes from a land where the Gospel hasn’t spread yet (65 AD), but she does wear her heart on her sleeve and comes off as a young girl with a strong mind. Any possible spinoffs featuring her specifically that you might bless us with in the future?

Leone: Thank you! Sheā€™s one of my favorites, too. I do have some plans for her adventures in the Roman Empire, possibly with Victoria of Alexandria, or perhaps later on in history when she meets a certain British-born evangelist in early medieval Ireland.

Q5: Renee and Innocence–are they too Immortal Champions of Sheol? And if not, how are they able to fight the forces of evil the way we see it done in the second half of The Dweller? What exactly sets them apart?

Leone: Renee and Innocence are ordinary mortals. Renee is blessed with luck, a quick wit, and being born into a wealthy family with an indulgent father. Innocence, on the other hand, is a poor country girl (and as a Puritan in Restoration England, doubly looked down on), but her devout faith gives her a power over many things they face.

Q6: As I’ve mentioned to you before, I did read another of your novellas a couple of years ago-The Governess of Greenmere-but truthfully I did not see or notice any of the amazing writing I witnessed in The Dweller. Do you think I was distracted and should go back and re-read it or has your writing changed much ever since that book?

Leone: I wrote that several years ago now and like to think Iā€™ve improved, but I definitely recommend giving it another shot! Thereā€™s some passages in it that Iā€™m fond of. (Iā€™d also recommend Webs and Shadows, especially the story ā€œSigriđ Sigdansdohtor and the Wolf of the Lobbewealdā€)

Q7: In closing, Paul I can’t stop expressing my gratitude for getting me inspired while reading your book. You embody everything I work and preach (no pun) every day both in my personal life and my social media life. I want to believe that this world, with all its evil, sin, depravity, and THE AGENDA, still hosts men and women who uphold higher standards for everything that is sacred, everything that is holy, everything that is immortal.

What’s next that we can look forward to? And needless to say, I hope this is just the beginning of having you on Virtual Pulp to promote more NEW LEGENDS IN THE MAKING!

Leone: Thank you very much! Iā€™m very glad you hold the book in such regard. As for whatā€™s next, Iā€™ve got a couple more Immortal Champions short story collections coming eventually. Stay tuned and God bless.

Q&A with Arthur Shattuck O’Keefe

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Virtual Pulp consistently reviews hidden gems in the cyber-slush pile of online book shopping. Independent authors who you might have never heard of otherwise get their books in the spotlight. The Infamous Gio occasionally gives them a microphone, too, when he conducts interviews. Recently Gio got independent author Shattuck O’Keefe to give an in-depth interview, and is sharing it with you today.

Q1: The Spirit Phone is your first published full-length novel. Why this book and why now?

 

O’Keefe: As for why this book: The idea for it hit me suddenly one day in August 2009, and I couldnā€™t let go of it.Ā 

As for why now: It really should have been much earlier, but from the time I conceived of it, various life events got in the way of getting it written. I finally got a complete draft done in early 2019, then managed to land a publishing agreement with BHC Press in late 2020, with the release in November 2022. (The audiobook, which came out the following June, earned Daniel Penz, the narrator, a 2023 Voice Arts Award.)

Iā€™ve always loved books, and I decided to write a novel. Iā€™ve long enjoyed speculative fiction as well as allegedly true tales of the supernatural. (Even if you take the latter with a grain of salt, they make for interesting reading.) Iā€™d been mulling over ideas for several years, and one day I was re-reading my copy of Phantom Encounters, a volume of the popular Time-Life book series called Mysteries of the Unknown. It contains a chapter on the alleged ā€œspirit phone,ā€ a device to attempt communication with the dead which Thomas Edison claimed in interviews that he had been trying to develop. Suddenly the idea hit me: What if Edison had actually built such a device, and what if it worked? That could be the premise of a novel, I thought. So, I wrote it.

Edison is a key supporting character, while the protagonists are occultist Aleister Crowley and inventor Nikola Tesla, who investigate the secrets of the spirit phone as its users increasingly fall prey to insanity and suicide.

In the course of my research for the book, I learned about a claim circulating online that Edison stole the spirit phone idea from Tesla. There is no evidence for this whatsoever. I wrote about it in an article posted on Medium.

Thereā€™s also a short story connected to The Spirit Phone, titled ā€œA Spirited Conversation,ā€ which appeared in the literary magazine The Stray Branch (Fall/Winter 2021). The magazine is in print form only, but the full text can be read on my website. It previously appeared in Suspense Magazine (Summer 2020), though itā€™s a slightly different version than the 2021 publication, which I consider definitive. There is a beautifully done audio recording of ā€œA Spirited Conversationā€ by The Spirit Phone audiobook narrator Daniel Penz. Itā€™s a little over 16 minutes long.Ā 

 

Q2: the way I found your book was purely coincidental. I was looking for new content to cover and (as I often do) I was reading some of the Amazon reviews on The Spirit Phone, when this specific reviewer caught my attention byĀ  negatively highlighting the lack of female characters in your book. I knew immediately I had to get you on VP!Ā 

What do you think of this modern trend that requires or even demands at times that authors meet a particular demographic representation quota in their stories?

 

O’Keefe: I donā€™t agree that a novel or short story must reflect a demographic checklist to be a ā€œproperā€ work of fiction. Though if, as a reader, the lack of some category of human or other is a deal-breaker for you, so be it. Thereā€™s no such thing as a novel that will appeal to everyone.Ā 

Your question reminds me of one review (really a non-review) of The Spirit Phone which listed the book as a DNF simply because the reviewer couldnā€™t get interested in characters who were white men. Nothing whatsoever is mentioned about plot, premise, editing, dialogue, world-building, or anything else that makes a novel a novel. I canā€™t consider that to be a book review. If you label a novel unreadable simply because you find the skin color or sex of the characters objectionable, you have not evaluated the novel. That, in a nutshell, is the problem with trying to assign ā€œdiversityā€ requirements to a book. Still, I find this to be the exception rather than the rule in the reviews Iā€™ve read.Ā Ā 

Besides, diversity of characters is not just things like race, sex, and sexual orientation. There are the charactersā€™ motives, objectives, personal values, temperaments, skills, etc. The protagonists of The Spirit Phone are historical figures. Aleister Crowley was a hedonistic, smart-aleck, pipe-smoking, drug-using adventurer who delved into the occult. He set mountaineering altitude records in an era before bottled oxygen and high-tech winter clothing. Nikola Tesla was a straightlaced, germophobic, non-smoking, work-obsessed genius who made invaluable contributions to electrical invention. Their personalities were very different, and thatā€™s the kind of diversity I tried to depict in my novel. If you want the more ā€œstandardā€ usage of diversity, Crowleyā€™s bisexuality and Teslaā€™s apparent celibacy are alluded to, but these aspects are included because thatā€™s part of who they were, not for the purpose of satisfying a perceived diversity checklist. Horror author Terence Taylor expressed a view similar to my own on this point in his review of The Spirit Phone for Nightmare Magazine.

As for the particular review you mention, by horror author and editor Amanda Lyons, I see it as a mixed review rather than a panning of the book. There is also praise, and I actually thanked her for it. However, I disagree with the portion quoted below, which I think partly exemplifies the issue you mention:

ā€œFor my own tastes this was a bit dry and impersonal and I was chagrined to find very few female characters (and that those who were there came in the form of uncouth harpies and demons at the beck and call of male sorcerers).ā€

Itā€™s unclear what ā€œpersonalā€ elements are seen as missing, so Iā€™ll skip that. As for the rest: Female supporting characters include Sadie the bookseller, who is indispensable in helping Crowley and Tesla. There are two female demons: Lirion and Elerion. Yes, they are bound to male mages (Crowley and antagonist Ambrose Temple, respectively), but Lirion voluntarily goes beyond the scope of her obligations to help Crowley and Tesla, while Elerionā€“also in freely choosing to aid the protagonistsā€“gives Temple the ultimate dressing down as she declares herself absolved of serving him. This is after she telekinetically snaps the neck of a monster that tries to sexually harass her. Thus, the female demons are much more than simply things to be used by the male mages. There is also Martha, a woman who is crucial in highlighting the moral bankruptcy of Temple and his plan. The only female characters who could reasonably meet the ā€œshrill harpiesā€ description are two in total: one female spirit contacted through the spirit phone and a young woman who Crowley and Tesla encounter in New Jersey. So, with all due respect to Ms. Lyons as a far more prolific author of fiction than myself, I canā€™t agree with her on this point.Ā 

When I read that review, I was reminded of an academic paper Iā€™d written on the female characters of Ernest Hemingwayā€™s unfinished story (possibly intended as a novel) ā€œThe Last Good Country.ā€ In it, I quote a paper by literature professor Margaret Bauer, who states:

ā€œHemingway is often criticized for his one-dimensional characterization of the women in his fiction. I would suggest that such critics are actually arguing with Hemingwayā€™s choice of focus. The problem they have with Hemingwayā€™s female characters is not that they are one-dimensional (the numerous studies of them suggest otherwise), but that they are usually not central characters. I would argue that it is the writerā€™s prerogative as to whose story he or she is most interested in telling.ā€

I agree with Professor Bauer, and I think her reasoning applies to either a literary giant like Hemingway or an obscure ā€œgenre fictionā€ debut novelist such as myself. Besides, there is no shortage of books with female protagonists in various genres, including fantasy, science fiction, and horror, if thatā€™s what youā€™re looking for.Ā 

Anyway, mixed reviews or bad reviews are a fact of life. Even the Harry Potter books were roundly condemned by Harold Bloom, perhaps the most famous and influential of American literary critics.

Q3: speaking of modern, what I loved about The Spirit Phone is the respect you showed for the period of time/locations where the story takes place. New York, her streets, restaurants, hotels, daily papers, everything is so detailed and so faithful to that time. Do you feel it’s important to keep that level of historical faithfulness even in alternate history fiction?

 

O’Keefe: Yes. With the caveat that I think of The Spirit Phone as a cross-genre novel, it is among other things an alternate history tale, and I think itā€™s important to strive for historical accuracy. If youā€™re going to depict the year 1899 without an effort to do so accurately, why bother calling it the year 1899? Unless, of course, you introduce anachronistic aspectsā€“historical inaccuraciesā€“as a deliberate decision in the service of the story.

One way to do this is to have the entire world be ā€œopenlyā€ anachronistic, such as in William Gibson & Bruce Sterlingā€™s novel The Difference Engine: The computer (a steam-powered variety) has become a reality in the 19th century, resulting in a global political order which includes a much more powerful British Empire, an independent Confederacy, and a Marxist republic on Manhattan Island. Another example of this approach is Bonsart Bokelā€™s Association of Ishtar series.

In The Spirit Phone, which is set in 1899, I tried to make the publicly known technology, infrastructure, political situation, etc. the same as our actual history (with the exception of the spirit phone itself, which is being marketed by Thomas Edison as a consumer product). If you suddenly appeared in the New York of the novel, it would look just like the real 1899 New York. Most of the anachronistic technology, such as a high-speed airship, is behind the scenes.

Every time I thought something might be historically incorrect, I checked it, especially ā€œpublicā€ technology and language. I took pains to make sure no one was using a 20th or 21st century expression. One exception is the expletive ā€œwanker,ā€ used by Crowley, that dates from the 1940s (in print), which I decided to use anyway because it conveyed the feeling I wanted. (One reviewer on the website LibraryThing claimed I was adding historical details only to ā€œshow offā€ my research rather than advance the story, but gave no examples of the allegedly superfluous details.)

I dispensed with accuracy in the case of certain biographical details, of course. Thereā€™s no evidence I know of that Crowley and Tesla ever met in real life, and a lot of the advanced technology I attribute to Tesla in the book isnā€™t necessarily stuff the real Tesla made, such as a metal detector and a taser. And as far as I know, Aleister Crowley never levitated naked up the side of Devils Tower in Wyoming.Ā 

Q4: Crowley and Tesla were just a delight to see interact with each other! Where did this idea of chocolate consumption for heightened clairvoyant powers come from?

 

O’Keefe: I actually donā€™t recall (ironically!) exactly how I came up with eating chocolate as a way for Crowley to recall a crucial lost memory. There is a scene in which Crowley is trapped, mid-teleport, in a bizarre environment. I came up with that first, then decided that Crowley had forgotten the incident, but needed to remember it, and I struck upon the taste of chocolate as a kind of mnemonic.Ā 

I think of Crowley and Tesla as a kind of oil & water mix, a speculative fiction ā€œodd couple,ā€ and when I came up with the idea for the book, it surprised me that (as far as I knew) no one else had ever put them together in a novel. I think there might be one other novel out there with the two of them (I canā€™t remember the title), which I learned of after I started writing The Spirit Phone. And I think Crowley shows up in one issue of the comic Herald: Lovecraft and Tesla.

Ā Thereā€™s no evidence the two met in real life, though they were both living in New York during World War I.Ā 

Q5: all throughout the story we read how Crowley and Temple use these grids to summon ā€˜familiarsā€™. Tell us more about that.

 

O’Keefe: In hindsight, maybe I should have called them talismans instead of ā€œgrids.ā€ They are taken from a book of magic titled The Book of the Sacred Magic of Abramelin the Mage, aka The Book of Abramelin. Itā€™s thought to date from the 15th century, but the original publication date is unclear. The book was used by Aleister Crowley in real life, so I decided to draw upon it.

There were already German, Hebrew, and French editions of Abramelin when S.L. MacGregor Mathers, an associate of Crowleyā€™s, translated it into English. Mathersā€™ translation was published in 1900. The book was used by Crowley early in his occult practices, in particular at Boleskine House, his estate in Scotland near Loch Ness. There are even rumors that Crowley called forth the Loch Ness Monster.

The talismans (ā€œgridsā€ in the novel) are said to be a means to accomplish various feats of magic. Every use in the novel corresponds to a claimed use in The Book of Abramelin. For example, when Crowley summons the demon (or familiar) Lirion so that she can interrogate a spirit trapped within Edisonā€™s spirit phone prototype, he uses a talisman described in The Book of Abramelin as used ā€œTo know Secret Operations.ā€ When the demon-familiar Ashtaroth is summoned to try to get rid of a massive lump of magnetite that is causing an emergency aboard the airship, the talisman used is one described in Abramelin as meant to perform ā€œChemical labours and Operations, as regardeth Metals especially.ā€ Similarly, the names of all three demon-familiars depicted in the novelā€“Lirion, Ashtaroth, and Elerionā€“are taken directly from The Book of Abramelin.Ā 

This was another point where ā€œhistorical accuracyā€ had to give way to the demands of the plot. In The Book of Abramelin, the magical operations described are often time-consuming, meticulous, and ceremonial, but I wanted something more dynamic and fast-paced. So I just have Crowley write out a grid and call the demon, boom.Ā Ā 

Q6: you and a few other authors like Bonsart Bokel are redefining modern fiction by using a different approach. Alternate history in the last few yearsā€™ mainstream has been, frankly, a joke. But you guys are exploring realms that are opening ground for new and compelling literature. What are your thoughts on this approach?

 

O’Keefe: Well, I tend to read more ā€œwidelyā€ than ā€œdeeply,ā€ and I canā€™t say I have a take on any recently published alternate history fiction. Those works which have inspired me are from the 20th century. For example, Harry Turtledoveā€™s The Guns of the South, Gibson & Sterlingā€™s The Difference Engine, and Len Deightonā€™s SS-GB (which is alternate history but non-science fiction). Then thereā€™s The Man in the High Castle by Philip K. Dick, which depicts a novelist living in an alternate timeline who writes about ā€œourā€ reality as an alternate timeline. I think the original alternate history novel depicting the introduction of advanced technology into a past era is actually a 19th century work: A Connecticut Yankee in King Arthurā€™s Court by Mark Twain, though it is not usually seen as ā€œspeculative fiction.ā€Ā 

I think of The Spirit Phoneā€™s premise and particular mix of historical characters as its distinctive points, but if Iā€™m opening up any new ground beyond that, Iā€™m happy. Maybe itā€™s also that the occult and technology both feature prominently, either separately or combined, though I donā€™t think Iā€™m the first writer to try that.Ā 

While alternate history is one aspect of The Spirit Phone, I think of it as a cross-genre work combining elements of horror, science fiction, science fantasy, murder mystery, and action-adventure. (Locus Magazine calls The Spirit Phone a historical fantasy. I have no objection to the label.) When I started writing the book, I didnā€™t think, ā€œIā€™m going to write a horror novel,ā€ or ā€œIā€™m going to write a science fiction novel.ā€ It was more like, ā€œI want to write a novel with lots of weird stuff happening,ā€ and added whatever elements I needed to make it so.Ā 

Q7: The Spirit Phone seemed to be a complete story. So what can we expect next from Mr O’Keefe? Will the Crowley/Tesla team be somehow reunited? Or any new projects you can tell us about? I think I can speak on behalf of VP and all of our readers and we definitely want to see more of these legends in the making!

 

O’Keefe: My current projects are: an English punctuation style guide for a publisher in Japan (which is nearly complete); an essay on Aleister Crowleyā€™s poetry collection Alice: An Adultery, which will be partly based upon an article I wrote on Crowleyā€™s visit to Japan in 1901; and a second novel which may or may not be a sequel to The Spirit Phone. Itā€™s very much in flux at the moment.

 

Make sure to check outĀ  the author’s work if it sounds interesting to you. Tell us what you think in the comments and tell somebody else about what we’re doing at Virtual Pulp.

Marketing Wisdom with Luke Stone & Crom

This was such an informative stream, I wanted other creators toĀ  catch it. I don’t advise sitting around watching streams for hours instead of being productive, but you can listen to this this while you’re working out, drawing, making supper, playing your instrument, etc.

One of the many takeaways is the dubious value of book trailers. Like so much I’ve done over time to provide something cool for readers/fans/followers, it takes a lot of time and effort, without earning you sales/ratings/reviews. The ROI is awful for probably 99% of authors. Something to think about.

Steampunk and Bonsart Bokel – a Q & A

By INFAMOUS šŸ¦€

After having reviewed both The Wrench in the Machine and Journey to Elysium, we felt it necessary to have a little interview with the visionary behind this universe we are so much enjoying. All the way from the Netherlands, Mr Bonsart Bokel!

 

Q1: is what you are writing steampunk? Or what should we call it?

 

Bokel: Yes, although I use different descriptions for every book. The Wrench in the Machine takes my definition of the Steampunk genre, Cyberpunk in the Past, to ā€˜Elevenā€™.

Q2: Steampunk seems like a very niche subgenre; what the general audience sees seems to be very limited and restrictive for creativity to thrive. Do you agree?

Bokel: I think the problem is we havenā€™t had the conversation on what Steampunk should be. To many, Steampunk is just an aesthetic. They discard the idea of being a genre entirely. So it became ā€œSteampunk is like porn. You know it when you see it.ā€Ā 

Currently, there is a lot of Fantasy with a Steampunk skin. (This is not necessarily Gaslamp Fantasy either).

The other cliche is the overall approach to history. This being the ā€˜oppressor vs oppressedā€™ or ā€˜class struggleā€™ narrative. It might make for decent stories, but does not make good Alternate History.

Q3: The ā€˜historicalā€™ element in fiction has been underrated or even misused. Do you feel your approach is different when applying history to your stories?

 

Bokel: My series has a high emphasis on Alternate History, so Iā€™m taking the ā€˜Pastā€™ part of the definition very seriously. There are more Steampunk authors like that. But you wouldnā€™t know them. They went to a different school and liveĀ  in Canada now.

Joking aside, some ignore the historical part just to give themselves the freedom to explore historical processes without seeming biased. The Guns Above series is a good example of this.Ā 

Q4: My favorite character from Journey to Elysium was Subject-09ā€¦Any chance we might see her again or even have her own dedicated novel? I love her character and not because she is a woman or because she is disabled either!

Bokel: Subject-09 is kind of an accident. A silly idea that people really love for some reason. Even as a short story (Cough, check out my page on Ream, cough) S-09 quickly proved people’s favorite along with Subject-06.Ā 

Currently, I am still exploring ideas for the future novels. Although I have ideas for her, S-09 place is in the bigger picture of the overall series. There is still so much I need to figure out for what I call Phase1 of the Association of Ishtar, I wouldnā€™t be surprised if I can’t get her to shine until the start of Phase 3. When will Phase 2 start? When I finally know what I want to do for the third novel. Until then, sheā€™ll make some small appearances, like in Anwin and Journey to Elysium.

 

Q5: Tell us briefly about your latest project going live soon on KS. Is this a comic book or a novel?

 

Bokel: The Kickstarter will launch on March 17 if all goes well. The Casket Girls is a novelette about mecha pilots serving in the French Imperial Penal Legion that will be illustrated. It will also contain various miniatures for your 3D printing pleasure as we are working on an RPG.

Q6: Originality in modern fiction seems rare these days. I think you are carving out the blueprints of something new and original. What can we see from the Association of Ishtar next?

 

Bokel: I already mentioned the RPG we hope to present by the end of the year.

Iā€™m working on various books. One is a second Anwin novelette, which is about an autonomous doll and her owner, Igraine. Another is the Knights of Avalon, which is kind of the male chivalrous counterpart to the Casket Girls.Ā 

Of course we also hope to have the second issue of our comic Journey to Elysium done.

Overall, I hope to create a community creating new Subjects, Constructs and Planes to be explored. Iā€™m already doing it on the illustration front with our Alternate History videos on Youtube. Finding a way to collaborate with co-writers would be great if only to explore other genres beside hard sci-fi without losing sight of the themes of Steampunk.

 

(Gee, and here I thought Alternate History stories were simply about taking famous characters from history and swapping race or gender LOL!)

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Don’t forget to back Bonsart!

And also follow him on REAM!

 

Your Go-To Site for Discovering Good Reads

2024 is off to a pretty good start this year, this blog is back to fulfilling its original purpose: spreading the news of good reads still being produced, by authors you might not have ever discovered without Virtual Pulp.

For those who are late to the party, here’s some of the authors we’ve featured here so far just since New Year’s:

 

Adventure:

Milton Lane

Fantasy:

Ernie Laurence, Jr.

Michael R. Schultheiss

Jonathan Shuerguer

Sci-Fi:

Misha Burnett

Robert Kroese

Hans Schantz

Sword & Sorcery:

James Krake

Robert Victor Mills

Eric Waag

It’s no coincidence that these are all indie authors, either. Tradpub fiction sucks, with few exceptions. Sure, there is a lot of indie fiction that stinks just as bad as tradpub. But thanks to Gio and me, it’s now easy for you to find the diamonds in the rough.

Have I missed anybody so far? Don’t worry–the Infamous Gio is a reviewing/interviewing machine, and he’s got a lot more lined up for you. In fact, this very week is already packed with reviews and an interview. (Steampunk fans should feel right at home.)

This is worth remembering:

First of all, nobody pays us to do this. We even buy the books/comics/whatever ourselves. We don’t owe anybody anything.

Secondly, we are honest. We want to find/read good books. We like giving indie authors a signal boost. When we enjoy something, we like sharing our experience, so others can enjoy it, too. But when we think a book is bad, we will let you know we think it’s bad. If it’s good, but misses the mark in one or more aspect, we will say so. It’s nothing personal against the author. We might even be fond of the author as a human being, but we are still going to be honest.

Speaking for myself, I’ve got empathy out the wazoo for my fellow indie authors. I know the odds stacked against them and the petty, unfair, and even diabolical crap most of them have to wade through just to make a sale. I’m very pleased when an indie has put together a masterpiece. But if it ain’t a masterpiece, I’m not gonna try to convince people it is.

At the same time, we won’t get butthurt if you disagree with us over the quality of a book. We’re not gonnaĀ  unfriend you, block, mute, or cancel you because we have different opinions. (We might debate with you, because that can be healthy and stimulating.)

We’re not gonna engage in shady behavior to steal somebody’s traffic, or reduce their traffic–even though that has been done to us, by individuals supposedly on our side in the Culture War. We’re not jealous because other blogs also share quality content, or are reviewing indie work. I wish there were more indie reviewers out there working through their towering TBR piles like we are–especially if they’re honest.

How about drama?

I suspect there are some talented creatives out there who identify as #IronAge. From what I know, I fit under that umbrella, too.

I’m sure there are talented creatives associated with #Comicsgate, too.

Unfortunately, it appears there are overly sensitive (or perhaps just drama-addicted) folks on both sides locked in a pissing contest over some petty BS even they probably can’t explain the origin of. I’ve been honing my craft/plying my trade alone, and don’t know that many people from either side yet. IOW I have no dog in this fight. I also believe it’s a silly, counterproductive fight. Same with Eric July vs. Ethan Van Sciver. I’ve got more important items on my to-do list than to take part in all that drama. I’m also annoyed that I have to wade through all that silly drama to find anything that interests me as a reader, a novelist, and an aspiring graphic novelist.

Bottom line: I’m not gonna take anybody’s side in one of these squabbles based on what hashtag they’re associated with.

The Good News:

There’s a lot of quality entertainment being written in the indie-sphere, and we’re gonna help you find it.Ā  (And some of it is mine, so consider looking at my work, too.) We’re also hosting the Infamous Writing Contest, to discover and showcase even more talented writers, whose published work you may be unfamiliar with.

We put out consistent content here, so stop by on the regular and let us know what you think. Consider subscribing to the blog, so you’ll never miss a post. And tell others about us and what we’re doing. We’re trying to grow our Internet footprint, and you can help with that.

 

 

An Interview with Milton Lane

By THE INFAMOUS REVIEWER Gio šŸ¦€


Q1: what was the initial motivation to write Island of The Lost? And what or who influenced the final product?


ML: Before I had started writing Island of the Lost my ambition was to write an urban fantasy novel. At the time I was reading the Monster Hunter series by Larry Correia (paid link) and wanted to try my hand at the genre. As I was fleshing out the story and the world I soon realized I didn’t have the skills to tackle a story of that length and scope. In the end I shelved the idea, kept the notes for the world I had built, and set about writing a smaller more contained adventure. Island of the Lost was the result.

Hannibal Harken started out as a character who had built a legend around himself seeking out the weird and magical, cataloging what he found, and creating a vast encyclopedia to pass on that information to others. In the original idea he was a bit of a character who would be referenced but never appear. His journal entries would have appeared in the appendix of the book and would have served as a means of providing world building and lore without dumping all that information in the middle of the narrative. This idea is why Island of the Lost starts out the way it does.

In the end I would have to say there are two main sources of influence on this novel. I’ve always loved the 1920’s – 1940’s style action hero and Harken was meant to fit into that mold. I wanted the main character to be in a similar vein to Indiana Jones and Rick O’Connell. But it wasn’t until I was introduced to Doc Savage via Razorfist’s video on pulp characters that Harken really coalesced as a character. The Man of Bronze really is the first Superhero and the gold standard for this type of fiction. To understand what makes Doc such a pulp icon helps a writer understand the genre.

My second influence would be the Death Gate Cycle by Margaret Weiss and Tracy Hickman. I loved the worlds they created in that series and it has served as inspiration for the world Harken and his friends inhabit.


Q2: are The Island of the Lost and your other (cyberpunk) novel your very first official publications?


ML: The Island of the Lost and The City Beneath the Eye (paid links) are my very first official publications. I have written quite a bit in the past. From short stories as a kid to a book trilogy when I was in early college. Telling stories has been a passion of mine for a while, though it was only for friends. Until recently I saw writing as a fun hobby but not something I would do as a profession. It wasn’t until Razorfist put out that Iron Age video that I decided to throw my hat in the ring and start creating for others’ enjoyment.


Q3: this book went through a ā€˜revisionā€™ as stated under the book description on Amazon. Can you share with VP what exactly was revised and why?

ML: Oh yeah, the book went through a major revision! When I first started writing and connecting with other people on X/Twitter I became aware of what Brian Niemeier calls ‘Self-Publish Syndrome’. Self Pub opens the door for everyone to put together a novel and publish it through Amazon no matter the quality. Because of this, self published works carry a stigma of being poorly edited, poorly written garbage. I was determined to avoid that stigma, then fell face first into it.

As I finished the first edit on the manuscript, I knew I needed an editor to polish this story as much as possible. At the time I had let one of my coworkers know I was working on a novel and was looking for an editor. He had a contact that had spent over twenty years as a technical writer and this person had spoken about moving into editing as a side hustle. He put us in contact and we worked out a nominal fee for an editing pass of my manuscript. It was more affordable than some of the editing rates I was seeing at the time, so I went for it.

I got the manuscript back and there were a ton of corrections and suggestions made. At the time I was very pleased with the results and set about fixing the issues the technical writer had found. After the revisions I did a two more editing passes, confident I was well on my way to avoiding the pitfalls of self publishing.

I was riding high right after publishing, too. The initial reviews were positive, and I made more sales than I expected. Then the critical reviews came in. The reviews weren’t negative but they were brutally honest. Throw in a few direct messages from fellow writers who reached out to offer me some advice and one thing became clear: the story was good but the manuscript was a mess. Readers mentioned issues such as grammar, sentence structure, and pacing. From an outsiderā€™s perspective it looked like I had just thrown my book out into the world without getting it into the hands of an editor.

This was a gut punch. Here I am asking people for their money and delivering a substandard product. It had to be corrected.

By this time I had made better connections in the Iron Age/Small Press/Pulp Rev circles. I had made a connection with a fantastic editor by the name of Daniel Riley who was working on editing my second novel. I was so impressed with his work and his dedication I sent him the manuscript for Island of the Lost while I got City Beneath the Eye ready for publication.

I figured, how many corrections could my manuscript really need? After all, I wrote a rough draft, did one round of edits, got an ‘editor’ to make corrections, then did a second and third pass. The problems should be few and far between, right?

Boy, was I wrong. Daniel took that manuscript behind the woodshed. He was absolutely brutal with his notes and corrections. Seeing all those notes was a humbling experience. But I was happy to see him tear it apart like he did. By being unrelenting in his edits, Daniel showed me he cared deeply about making my story the best it could possibly be. And the results speak for themselves.

The new version has been revised top to bottom, is leaner where it needed to be leaner, and is fleshed out in areas that needed some extra attention. Without Daniel’s edits my manuscript would not be at the level it needed to be.


Q4: we are seeing a ton of sword & sorcery in the indie circles at the moment, followed by sci-fi and some cyberpunk. But what I really think needs more of a ā€˜revivalā€™ is the golden age pulp writing like you brought in The Island of the Lost. Do you think you could be the one carrying that torch, or do you feel like your heart is more into sci-fiĀ  and/or cyberpunk?

ML: I do feel like classic adventure fiction has a lot of potential for a revival. Though I don’t think I’ll be the torchbearer to lead it. I see myself as following a path already laid out by other Indies who have worked hard to figure all this stuff out. Brina Williamson’s Merona Grant novels are in the same vein and from all accounts are very good. I also think Cirsova and Story Hack Magazine have published some pulp adventures as well. I’m sure there are others who have already published works. People like them did all the heavy lifting to create an environment for others to be able to successfully publish and start finding an audience.

For a proper revival I think it would take a Lester Dent or Walter B. Gibson type to succeed. Someone who knows how to spin a yarn, has the right combination of lived experiences and imagination to draw from, and can put out several adventures a year. I’m not sure who can pull it off, but I’m sure someone can.

To be honest, I feel like I’m still finding my feet as an author. The City Beneath the Eye is an outlier that I half stumbled into while trying to make a short story for a magazine submission. I don’t see myself doing much more in the cyberpunk genre but I have some plans for various books that would fit Sci-Fi, Fantasy, and Science Fantasy as genres as well as more adventure fiction.


Q5: what I found refreshing is that your MC doesn’t get romantically involved with any of the female characters in the story. Nothing wrong with romance per se but sometimes these relationships feel forced or very routine-like. Was that something you intentionally avoided?


ML: Not getting the main character involved in a romance subplot was a conscious decision. I don’t find anything wrong with romance but it certainly didn’t fit here. When formulating Hannibal as a character I wanted him to walk the line between being a gentleman and a hell raiser. The kind of man who could navigate the complex social structures of high society by day and go drinking with the lads at night. With that in mind I wanted him to take a more classic approach to romance. Rather than the ‘Love interest of the Week’ where Hannibal shacks up with a different woman at the end of the book similar to a character like James Bond, he is very much a Gentleman in search of his Lady. I may introduce a love interest in the future, but I’d rather it be one important character. Someone who compliments Harken well.


Q6: are the places and locations listed in this story entirely fictional?


ML: The places and locations in this story are largely fictional but do pull greatly from real world locations that I’ve been to. The Invincible is similar to the Lusitania and Titanic while the Island has geography similar to the U.S. East coast. Though the layout of the sunken bay in the fourth act combines elements from Hanauma bay in Hawaii as well as fuel piers and stations I’ve seen.


Q7: not sure why, but as I was reading the dialogue, I just kept hearing the charactersā€™ voices in an Irish accent. In your vision, what would these characters really sound like?


ML: When creating the characters I tried to ‘cast’ them with actors to give me a clearer mental picture of how they looked and talked. And, by referencing actors from various regions, I was able to solidify each character’s voice in my head. For instance: Hannibal Harken, to me, speaks with a received pronunciation style upper class accent, while Lord Blackwrym speaks with the accent of British aristocracy. The characters of Annabelle, Magnolia, and Sam speak with a southern drawl while Colin O’Shea has an Northern Irish accent. Javier, the man from nowhere, speaks with a generic American accent.


Q8: speaking of language, I believe that for this retro pulp style to really work, prose is crucial. One slip and modern euphemisms can make the whole thing collapse. I was really surprised that you really made that conscious effort to keep it all rooted in that wholesome prosaic style of the great pulp classics. How did you manage that in such a brilliant fashion?


ML: Like you, I hate modern talk in my period entertainment. I find it to be lazy on a scriptwriter or author’s part to add in that kitschy way of speaking that is so prevalent in everything today. If I’m playing Red Dead Redemption I don’t want Arthur Morgan sounding like a guy from a 1990s action movie. If I’m watching Lord of the Rings I don’t want lol-so-random Joss Whedon style snark. I want the creator’s best attempt at authenticity.

Its’ with that mentality I approached the dialogue in The Island of the Lost. I wanted people to speak as authentically to the period as possible. To achieve this I made a conscious effort to keep modern vernacular out of my story. This was a challenge as it took several passes to catch innocuous but modern idioms that would pull the reader out of the narrative. In the end I’m satisfied with the results though I know I’ll have to study more period literature and prose to sharpen the dialogue for future adventures. Thankfully one of the authors I follow on X/Twitter posted a link to an archive of pulp magazines so there’s plenty of material to learn from and enjoy! I wish I could remember who it was so I could thank them publicly and one day buy them a whiskey and cigar for the treasure trove of pulp goodness.

Q9: what can we expect in the foreseeable future from Mr. Lane the ā€˜classic pulp fiction writerā€™? Are we going to see The Adventurer back in action soon? I know it’s very easy to take the wrong turn with a character: write too much of the same stuff and people will say it got boring. Write a totally different story and people will say that the new stuff lost its original appeal. Can you disclose anything you are planning, now that you’ve made some true fans of this whole universe?


ML: For the foreseeable future it’s going to be self-publishing novels and honing my craft. I still have half a million words of writing to ‘get the suck out’ so to speak in regards to writing as a profession. Even if I’m producing novels entirely on my own I want to hit a professional standard. I’m comfortable telling stories that top out at 60k ā€“ 100k words which is close to the standard pulp length novel. I’m also looking to produce more short fiction and long fiction as I continue to grow as an author.

As far as what I’m working on, I have two books planned for this year. The first is a second Hannibal Harken adventure titled The Terror Beneath Mt. Misery. The outline is complete and work has already started. The other book I hope to have written, if not fully published, is a second book in the Cyberpunk dystopia of Salvation titled ‘Upon the Streets of Salvation.’ That book will complete the thematic arc of the first book and finish the duology.

I plan on doing more Hannibal Harken stories. Ultimately, my long term goal is to hit a professional level of 2.5k words a day and 200,000 words written a year. Once I hit that level I’m confident I could do one or two adventure books a year to a high standard. Like the classic pulp novels that inspired Harken’s world these will be serialized adventures rather than a series. I want each book to be a self-contained adventure that an interested reader can pick up and enjoy without reading everything that came before.

I am conscious of how difficult this type of writing can be. Go too far in one direction and you get formulaic and stale, drift too far in the other and you lose what made readers love your creation. My goal is to tell interesting tales of high adventure set in a world influenced by pulp and high-fantasy. With each novel a reader comes away satisfied by a story well told and leaves them dreaming of what else is out there just waiting to be discovered.


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Fallen Crest Abbey by James Krake

An inside look by INFAMOUS šŸ¦€


“They fought for themselves and others but paid the ultimate price. They have been buried in the southern cemetery of Fallen Crest Abbeyā€


There is this author/youtuber I’ve been following now for some time by the name of James Krake. Although known mostly as a cyberpunk genre writer, Krake also runs a webnovel on Royal Road titled The Undying Emperor. This novel departs a good deal from the typical genre Krake is known for. I won’t spend too much time suggesting our readers to start following The Undying Emperor, though they should, for it is truly a marvelous work of sword and sorcery fiction extravaganza. But what I really want to zero-in on is the short story within this webnovel; a true ā€˜hidden gemā€™:Ā 

Fallen Crest Abbey.


INFAMOUS: what is Fallen Crest Abbey and what inspired this story?

Krake: Bram Stokerā€™s Dracula actually. I like exploring form and genre and a gothic horror epistolary story intrigued me. That started the series of questions I had to answer in order to make a satisfying story that would actually matter to readers of my webnovel. Iā€™ve been doing a good deal of thinking about how sci-fi and fantasy should be incorporating matters of faith, so I wanted to take a look at some of the religious aspects of this fantasy world.

INFAMOUS: I’ve read both of your published cyberpunk novels and follow The Undying Emperor on Royal Road, but to me it is in Fallen Crest Abbey that I sense a new level of maturity from you as an author. Do you agree?

Krake: Fallen Crest Abbey was written to have a different tone and feeling to it. Iā€™m not sure I would call it ā€˜maturityā€™, but itā€™s certainly different. The novellas I am writing in 2024 should feel closer to how Fallen Crest Abbey came together, and next year I have a stand-alone Iā€™ll write which should be a full novel length experience thatā€™s even better.


INFAMOUS: sometimes this question gets thrown around a lot: will we ever see the likes of a new Tolkien, or a new Howard, or a new Lovecraft, in the realms of indie authors? I think we have, in the works of British writer R. V. Mills. But when I read Fallen Crest Abbey I see that same ā€˜sparkleā€™, that same unrelenting and unapologetic quest–albeit under a different writing style-for new legends in the making.Ā 

Is that something that you have been aware of at all?

Krake: The problem, I think, is that those names became those names because they were able to influence people. They had an impact on future literary endeavors the way Doyle did (or further back, Shakespeare). So, I donā€™t think the question today is ā€œwill we see somebody who writes as well as so-and-so?ā€ but will that person get noticed? Just looking at the numbers, and the advantages today, there are probably MANY people better than Tolkien, who simply havenā€™t gotten the reverence because society is more connected, critical, and quick to move on.


INFAMOUS: speaking of legends, there is a creature weā€™re introduced to in FCA called a ā€˜grendelā€™. I found some of his features most fascinating. Would you share with us how this grendel came about?

Krake: Beowulf, mixed with my approach to trolls that tries to portray them as early hominids. I coaxed up the legend the way I felt people would rumor-monger around a campfire and indulged the horror aspect it can create.


INFAMOUS: one thing that I loved about Fallen Crest Abbey is how most chapters open with a formal letter written by one of the characters. It really is an effective way to set up a certain mood and pace. Was this a conscious decision or did it just develop that way as you wrote the story?

Krake: It was how I initially conceived of the story, because it posed a technical challenge. I had to figure out how to explain the plot beats, endear the characters, and keep everything well paced, despite using journal entries, letters, posted bounties, and any other ā€˜recordā€™ that I could come up with. A large reason I became attracted to the idea was the challenge of ending the story, and writing it, without the structure of the story itself giving away the ending.

INFAMOUS: can you disclose future projects-if any-related to Fallen Crest Abbey? What about future works not necessarily related to FCA?

Krake: Well itā€™s clearly part of The Undying Emperor, which is mostly a life story, heroā€™s journey of conquest. That has a particular genre to it, however. The world itself has possibilities far beyond what befits essentially a YA action story designed for weekly releases. This year Iā€™ll be writing a novella that is to be like a mix of Romeo & Juliet with The Count of Monte Cristo, taking place in the same world, and Iā€™ve got the start of a novel that started from the question ā€œWhat if The Odyssey, but the main character couldnā€™t fight? Can a scholar be a good protagonist?ā€

On a more immediate horizon, my next paperback release is just around the corner, keep an eye out for Low Key Connections, a Narnia-style isekai. Light hearted, fun, and also high action.


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Well folks, there you have it. In a world of TikTok, instant gratification, and low attention span, supporting authors like James is important to keep good story-writing thriving. If you’re reading this, most likely you already know that there are great authors out there who deserve recognition and that, sadly, reading books in general is dwindling in our society.Ā 

Support these writers, support books, support Virtual Pulp!Ā 

INFAMOUS šŸ¦€


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